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BronyWriter


I write pony words. Millions of them. Some people actually think they might be worth reading. I am very thankful for that. Also, I have a Patreon now?

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This story is a sequel to The Storm and the Scorpion


The Storm King has been defeated, his former subjects are recovering, and the world is being rebuilt, trying to erase all evidence of his tyranny. The new chaos god, the sister of the Equestrian prince Antares, has left Equestria in an attempt to heal from the events of the war, and with the help of her friend, the former seapony Princess Skystar, she travels the world, hoping to find the peace she seeks, even if things do not go the way she hopes.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 17 )

Oh, this is gonna be gooood!!!

"If you're not talking, you're not swimming!"

I believe this sentence has one too many nots in it.

I'm really loking forward to seeing Kristen's development and seeing how she handles her brother.

I love how one story branched out into several different timelines. Bronywriter, you've shown a lot of flexibility in the worlds you have created from that one story. Always a pleasure reading!

I'm a little overwhelmed with all the spin-offs to the original story, so how do I get here?

Not a Brony -> Alicorn Princess -> Prince -> Storm and Scorpion -> Wanderings?

"We'll send her back a note," she said, waving her talons. "Besides, it'll be a lot like when I helped Twilight and her friends against the Storm King!"

But... She didn't, though? Twilight and Co. were locked up for the last book.

Fun and good chapter.

I would love to read more of these two! They have good chemistry, and I see a lot of potential world(re)building with them.

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Yeah, I just started a job with a ton of free time (as in, I'll probably only do work work on the average day for maybe an hour out of a ten hour shift) so I should get a ton more writing done.

Is it fair for me to call Kristen....a little naïve.

I can understand her concerns about what her brother is doing and has become, but I think she is ignoring the extenuating circumstances: a war that nearly led to the destruction of one's kingdom would drive anyone (anypony) over the edge.

9971073
Yeah, for sure, but at the same time, it is her brother, and they are pretty close in age, so they were raised pretty much at the same stages at the same time. Practically twins. Seeing a person she knew so well turning into that would be hard.

Oooh a new chapter, now this is welcome surprise.

Kristen is showing her age and in for a rude awakening, when the things she do to help backfires. Becuse they most likly will backfire in some form or way.

Oh my.. I’d forgotten about the end of the storm king.

Glad to see more of this

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