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ZuzuSky21


a very shy girl with a big imagination while having so many AU's crumbling into her brain~

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Determined and stongminded, sixteen year-old Rainbow Dash can't wait to start Junior year this semester! With new changes, new students, new friends, a new crush, high school drama, and new challenges along the way, Rainbow Dash receives a magenta, 200 wide ruled journal for the school year, she decides to write down everything that happens in her school year as personal memories.
But sometimes in a girl's personal thoughts, some things you just can't always write down. Especially if the whole school ends up knowing your personal secrets!

Inspired by the new movie on Netflix, "To All The Boys I Loved Before".

PLEASE DON'T STEAL OR COPY ANY OF MY STORIES,,,, I WILL REPORT YOU!!

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 46 )

It seems to me like you're using Rainbow as a puppet for you to fit yourself. It's new to me and a bit out of character, but I still want to see where this goes. The fact that you introduced us to her like this is commendable. You used a bit too much specific info, I felt like, but at least now we know all this stuff about her. Keep on this path; I'm eager to see where it leads.:pinkiehappy:

I was really looking forward to this new story. Can't wait to read it! :heart:

*dies*
THIS IS SO AMAZING OMG AAAAAAAAAAAAA

9161902
Oh, I am not using Rainbow Dash as a puppet for my life at all! XD Also, if you thought that way, then no, you are wrong. :twilightsheepish:

I am using her character based on Lara Jean from "To All the Boys I Loved Before" so that's why she's so polite and sweet and all. Besides, like I said in the author's note. This is an AU, which means Alternate Universe so things are going to be different. I hope I don't sound rude but I just wanted to clarify on some things. :3

Also, I am happy you are interested in what happens next. I was actually pretty nervous of uploading this new story because it's another AU of mine that makes the characters different from the show but eh, it's an AU, anything can happen!

But thanks for the nice words! Also, with too much detail? I am sorry but I have been having trouble wirh being descriptive in my writing abilities so I was trying to put the reader in the scene, but I guess I did a little too much, huh? :twilightblush: Well, a girl loves writing, what can ya do? XD

9162408
Thank you so much!~ :3

9162598
Oh Liah, you are always dying XDD But thank you ever so much!~ ❤

9162745
Yup XD
You deserve sweetie <3

Hmm, simple, straightforward and sweet. I like it so far! :pinkiehappy: I've noticed you've mastered the "Show don't Tell" norm pretty good, and that's something I give you a :yay: for!

A teeny-tiny friendly tip: Though descriptive works are cool, try not to tell the whole character's backstory in one chapter. You'll run out of ideas eventually! Let the readers be interested in the story because there are things they don't know but want to discover.

Nothing else to add, my Zsu Zsu. Keep doing great, you're getting better and better! :heart:

To all the boys I've loved before is FREEKEN AMAZING YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY YOU MADE ME WITH THIS I LOVE YOU CINNAMON YOU SLAAYYY:raritydespair::heart:

9162949
Thanks for the advice! I had lots of trouble working on descriptions in setting and story plots so I kind of got a little overbroad....? :twilightblush:

But thanks ever so much for the wonderful words!~ ❤

9162964
AYEEE THAT'S MY MOVIE YOOOO!!!~ 😭😭😭❤❤

9162949
Also, for some reason Fimfiction is not letting me comment on your userpage so why not send you a message in the comment section? :3

I want to thank you for putting "Dear Diary~" to your faves and adding it your "Great Stories" list! I honestly can't thank you enough for the support! Thank you!!!~ :33

9163674
It's a very wonderful movie!~ I highly recommend it!~
Also, I have said this is many times today, and I am starting to get upset....this is an AU. An Alternate Universe, meaning characters and settings can change. And yes, Dash is out of character because her personality is based on Lara Jean in the movie "To All The Boys I Loved Before". I know you said you haven't seen it, so Dash is going to act sweet, calm, ya know the opposite of what she is in the show. And it's my AU and my story, so please, can everyone STOP saying Dash is out of character?! I don't mean for you only but to 9161902 as well.

Also, thank you so much for the support! I didn't mean to sound rude but I was getting upset...

BEST. CHAPTER. EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“There’s absolutely NO way anyone is going to catch me writing in a 200-paged diary!”

I got the reference 😂

This is just amazing aaaaaaaaaa ❤ ️
I can't wait for the next chapter 😍

Can't wait for the beginning of classes :pinkiehappy:

9289334
Haha, you should be! :raritywink:

I've just read the first bit & it's SUPER AWESOME!!!:rainbowkiss:

9388025
Awwww shucks, thank you ! 💕

OH MY GOD!!!I loved the way you described everything in SO MUCH detail!I felt like she was me and I was really there!It's brilliant!:rainbowkiss:

“Xiǎoshǒu.”

This means small hand.I know this because I know the basics of chinese.

Sorry if I sound all boasty and everything.I couldn't help it!!!!:twilightblush:

Anyway,I absolutely love the fact that you decided to include another language.It's an awesome original idea!

“There’s absolutely NO way anyone is going to catch me writing in a 200-paged diary!”

OMG!! Sooooooooooo Rainbow Dash! :rainbowlaugh:
This is sooooo amazing!

MORE PLS!SO AWESOME!

9392482
Oh my gosh my face is super red atm, haha :twilightblush: I so greatly appreciate your sweet comments!~ :3

9392508
I take Mandarin classes so yeah it's good to add another language~

9392517
LMFAO haha XD

9394112
Hehe, so sorry but I am working on Part 2 of VOTU right now so it's going to take a while......:twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by RotiKhaase deleted January 11th

This
Chapter
Is
Soooooooooooooooooooo
AWESOME!!!!!!
This was brilliant!The description, the use of language...It was PERFECT!!!:pinkiehappy:

Baabbyyyyyyy:fluttershbad: stop making me cryyy

9461171
Thank you ever so much!~ :3

9461858
babyyyyyyyyy babbbyyyyy babyyyyy ooggohohoooooohhhh

9464739
Babyyyyy babyyyyy babyyyyy noooooo

Love the addition of the song! Great work!

Yes!!! The chapter where Rainbow meets the Best Stallion! She was adorable! You did a great job! And man, reading this brought back school memories. Bad ones. Which I highly commend you for! You have a talent for descriptive writing! You made me feel like I was in school again!

And it breaks my heart seeing Rainbow think she's embarrassed in front of her crush. Soarin' likes her! She just needs to know! Hnnngggg!

Dash is me trying to talk to my crush :rainbowlaugh:

“Ughh, suck my dick AJ...suck it really hard,” Pinkie pouted, while folding her arms in rage. Applejack started laughing nonstop, clutching onto her chest, as she placed her backpack behind her back.

Lmao that's so me

“Hmmm, ogling number 20 huh Dash?” My eyes rapidly widened as they started batting on their own. I began to shake my head rapidly before Sunset grabbed my arm and pulled me off from my bench.

Ooh~

The boy, a soft and charming fellow, sweating bullets across his attractive face, gave Sunset a calm glare. His fine shimmering emeralds shone in the sunlight, his dark navy blue hair drenched in sweat causing him to look even more handsome. His bright cyan skin, as pure and smooth as the clouds sent from heaven, his calm gentle hands were smothered with the brown dirt, covering the pureness of his sweet innocent soul, his white shining teeth could blind any man who ever dared to stare upon such bewitching beauty.

Getting a lil poetic, aren't we?

“What?! Soarin is your brother???!!” I gasped loudly as the period bell rang.

I'm just as shocked as you, Dashie. :eeyup:

My dad is literally my unsung hero and without him, I wouldn’t be here. I love my dad so so much~ I love u daddy~

This is the cutest thing ever :heart:

“Lǜsè nián hé jì,”

Am I gonna google this? Yes, yes I am.

Awesome!!! I just love your work, always keep shining!:heart:

9725896
oh man, i haven't gotten such a sweet and loving comment, yet ! <33 thank u ever so much~ and yes, dashie is a very adorable flustered bean in this au and yUS,, best stallion is here finally !!! <33 and thanks so much for the descriptive writing compliments~ these comments, make me write more for my love readers, i honestly can't say thank u too much for ur support!~ <333

9726163
don't worry, aj will suck some apple pie lattterrrrrrrr~~:rainbowwild::ajsmug:
also,,,, you'll see why sunset and soarin are related ! i promise~

9731473
aaaa,, thank u so so much~ ur so so sweet! thanks for ur support~ <33

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