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I like the story so far :twilightsmile:

“Twilight,” Velvet dove into another kiss, but her hooves seemed to wander elsewhere. Once pinning Twilight down to the carpet, as though acting on their own, Velvet’s hooves descended down the alicorn’s torso, brushing past her wings and gently groping her rear. Twilight squinted as this welcome touch proceeded to make the advancements she’d secretly hoped for. Twilight attempted to roll over, hoping to be the one to pin her mother, but she found the rear-squeezing culprits to be faster than she thought. “You’re not going anywhere,” Velvet grinned, breaking from the kiss to deny her daughter’s wishes. Battling with the overwhelming emotions, Twilight didn’t find herself in a position to argue; she nodded, left only with the strength to nod and surrender, for at her hooves was an immeasurable puddle of fluids and atop her the mare in charge.
Twilight Sparkle’s wings were fully erect since the moment she’d decided to kiss her mother, but as the scene progressed, she could feel them throbbing, begging for release of some sort. Never before had Twilight experienced such a phenomena, but now that Velvet, pinning her down against a hotel mattress, wrapped in a number of blankets, had found the key to her everlasting lust, the answer to solving her newfound issue may be closer than she thought.

Secret Teleportation? Or is this all a dream?
Also, I think Velvet should be slapped. When someone is screaming and yelling, you make sure they're alright. You don't wave of any and all concerns they express. This got too close to rape for my liking.

I don't suppose there's any ETA on the next update?

Your story is interesting I hope you continue it, I look forward to it. I want to know what happens next.

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