Sunset Shimmer is my dream girl.
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i haven't read it yet, but the description reminds me of the invisble.
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Thanks, I've had a quick check on Google and that appears to be the movie I was thinking of.
Let’s see what happens
Keep up the good work.
Honestly I hope he gets a happy ending
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Agreed.
Really loving the story so far.
Keep it up!
I love it!
Nice that he got a happy ending.
Also, Stasis? Is that a reference to Transformers?
I only have one complaint: should've went into more detail with the orgy at the end.
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Well the only other thing I could think of was Cryostasis and that didn't sound right, having the tree put him in a coma didn't feel right either so stasis felt close to what I wanted.
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How do you know it's an orgy? you can do various things to the body with kissing, licking or sucking.
Toe and finger sucking for one and kissing any part of the body in a worship like way and licking his chest and nipple area or even his ears and neck is another thing they could do.
Imagination is a powerful thing and only leaving a subtle hint, well you can imagine what can actually happen.
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Yeah, Stasis is better sounding than Cryostasis in this situation.
And it does add the potential for a crossover fic, like maybe humanized Transformers exist. Great story. 10/10
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Well i just thought it would've been a nice way to rapp up the story with Phan and the girls having some naughty time with eachother.
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Well maybe at some point I might do another chapter for the fun part but for now, I'd think it'd be fun if others could imagine what is happening as they might want things a little differently.