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Smart Mouth


I know I'm weird but normal people are boring anyway

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The Wizardring World is in a bad way since Voldemort, so they turn to magical beings for help. The Cutie Mark Crusaders are excited to be part of the first class of magical beings accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, but something goes terribly wrong when the sorting hat sorts them into different houses!

Can their friendship survive being separated like this?



Long Description Provided by:

RadicalDishonesty
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/129540/RadicalDishonesty

Please check him out, he writes much better stories then me.


Inspired by:

Sweetie Belle and the School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/161408/sweetie-belle-and-the-school-of-witchcraft-and-wizardry


If Wishes were Ponies . . . .
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406279/if-wishes-were-ponies


Magic School Days
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/371039/magic-school-days


Albus Potter And the Year of The Badger by Bartimus Crotchety
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/4256837/1/

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 23 )

Huge, huge recommendation write a resume because while it might be good no one would really know what the story is about so until a resume is added I will not read it.

9114503
It has a "short description", though not a very good one. Fun fact, the long description is mandatory and per the site's rule must describe the story... so not this. This is useless.

Yeah, this isn't just a reader repelling eye-sore but a violation of Da Rules.

9114503
Not sure if this is what you meant but I added the short Description to the long description so people know what it is

Wow, this really good! I really like how you described how ponies would change wizard society! It's also cool how you put science into the mix! Keep up the good work!

9114529
Very good thank you very much, and realize that this was not for me but for you in the long run, sorry if it sounded otherwise.

Excellent start, looking forward to more.

There's a tag for Harry Potter now. You'd do well to use it.

Rainbow dash is an absolute dick! Why didn't Twilight stop her at the quidditch store!

PS: Love what you did with Scootaloos character arc! Keep up the good work!

Good chapter but you have tendency to put 'well' instead of 'while'.

9118530
Sorry, It's just how I talk. I don't mean for it to come out in my writing but sometimes, a lot of the time, it does.

I hope it's not to distracting and I'll keep an eye out for it

Crusaders fight that house system! :yay:

9118404
Dash is acting like a typical mother of a disabled child.

As one such child I can tell you there is nothing more terrifying then our mom's, even the good ones who refuse to let us use our disability as an excuse for poor behavior, they will still tear people apart who so much give their kid a funny look. At least that's my experience.

Dash might not have adopted Scoot in this fic but she does have those same, overprotective, instincts

I can't wait for the next chapter. Discord would be so proud of Rose.

The blue mare looked at the price tag and gaped, "I can't afford that!?" It was 5000 Galleons! That's over 10000 Bits! It cost a bucking years pay!

"Take it on the house," Jasper almost begged, "Call it a peace offering for the... earlier misunderstanding,"

The blue mare glared at him before snatching the broom, "It's the least you can do," she glared.

A big turnaround from being shocked to righteous anger, there, huh?

The sentient dragon child fidgeted a little, "Can I get a polishing kit?" he asked as he put a few sickles on the counter.

The princess sighed, "I just bought you one last month! How much polish does a wand need!?"

So, is Spike obsessively polishing his wand, or is he using the polish for something else like scales?
... Could excessive care for your possessions be a dragon greed thing?

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RD is supposed to be shocked and angry that the Shopkeeper showed Scootaloo a broom she has no logical way of paying for (in addition to everything else). Sorry I didn't convey that properly.

As for the polish.

Spike is polishing his wand daily, like he is supposed to. The polish kit isn't meant to last more then a month.

I don't remember where I learned this stuff but I'm pretty sure JK Rowling said that is part of how wizards are supposed to take care of their wands. Ron and Harry were just lazy wand owners. Harry was scared of his wand and Ron's was a hand me down, so they didn't have that connection most wizards had with it. Hermione did though.

Twilight just doesn't get that is proper wand maintenance, because it does seem a bit obsessive but then she doesn't have a wand that would allow her to understand.

I really like this story, definitely deserves more views.

9132292
It's still pretty new. Hopefully more people discover it as it goes on. Still I'm glad so many people seem to it already.

Scorpius has a long road ahead of him.

9138673
Indeed he does and I'm sure Scootaloo will do everything she can to make things easier on him. That's just how she is with her friends.

Everyone in the world Facepalms

Poor Spike. Getting no respect, is a race that he doesn't look like at all, can't reach the knocker. Also i wouldn't know the number of teeth off the top of my head. I wonder what his relationship with Dinky is. He obviously knows something personal about her, given he's aware she reads minds, but I also don't know if they knew each other very well.

Don't take that a critical because I'm rsther excited by the prospect of those beinf things that have to develop.

And discussions about slavery, delivered to Apple Bloom, thrust into a complicated situation she knows nothing about.

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