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A Mark of Hypnosis

When a colt has an unusual request for Cloudy Mind, will she finally discover her special talent and earn her mark?

Edit: Sorry the cover pic is upside down, not sure how to fix it.

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ExplosionMare

ExplosionMare #1 · Aug 15th, 2018 · · ·

Whenever a character is going into thought, it’s better to put the words in italics so the reader knows there’s a thought ahead of time. This is also useful for lyrics, passages, and basically anything that isn’t dialogue (unless a word needs emphasis).

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