Just a writer who writes for myself. If you enjoy my work, great. If you don't that's okay too!
Following a passionate yet painful performance, Octavia is reunited with a friend she abandoned long ago to pursue her musical career. Somethings change, but fortunately some remain the same.
Artwork is of my Original Character, by the wonderful jen-neigh.
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Not bad. But your spacing needs some work. Different character's thoughts should be separated into their own paragraphs, it's too jumbled.
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Thanks, I'll work on that.
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Take a look at the Writing Guide under the Help button.