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Well, I guess I'm along for the ride now, to see if this turns into anything more complex or interesting than "SEX SLAVEZ, LOL"
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Don't worry I have more planned then just a sex slave story. It won't always be clop lol ^^
This is horrible.. I want to cuddle her, comfort the poor thing..
I want to know what happens next now.. I don't even care if it's clop or otherwise I just want to see more of this adorable young changeling.. Buck her caretaker, though..
1009296 That's exactly what she wanted to do! Well, kinda. Not really.
Sorry its taken so long to bring out the next chapter I have been busy and all, if anyone fancies being my editor as well since I know my grammar and punctuation is terrible it will be a great help ^^.
One thing you need to be careful with is the tense of your story- you've switched between past and present repeatedly throughout the chapter.
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Thanks :) Sorry I make a plan the expand with that plan, but luckily I have a editor now who will help me :)