• Member Since 24th Jul, 2012
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Benweston1123


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Well, I guess I'm along for the ride now, to see if this turns into anything more complex or interesting than "SEX SLAVEZ, LOL"

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Don't worry I have more planned then just a sex slave story. It won't always be clop lol ^^

This is horrible.. I want to cuddle her, comfort the poor thing..

I want to know what happens next now.. I don't even care if it's clop or otherwise I just want to see more of this adorable young changeling.. Buck her caretaker, though..

1009296 That's exactly what she wanted to do! :pinkiecrazy: Well, kinda. Not really. :unsuresweetie:

Sorry its taken so long to bring out the next chapter I have been busy and all, if anyone fancies being my editor as well since I know my grammar and punctuation is terrible it will be a great help ^^.

One thing you need to be careful with is the tense of your story- you've switched between past and present repeatedly throughout the chapter.

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Thanks :) Sorry I make a plan the expand with that plan, but luckily I have a editor now who will help me :)

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