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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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An average day morning in Ponyville had just been turned on its head when an unexplained carnival appeared on the edge of town. Nopony is quite sure what to make of it, but it seemed like a lot of fun. Of course, our Ponyville heroes decide to get involved in the festivities and shenanigans ensues as strange magic starts to affect them all in different ways.

Co-author Foal Star
Rated it Teen just in case. If it's not needed let me know.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

This was so cute! Ember in a pink dress gosh what a wonderful idea. With spike being a fairy. I can't wait for us to write the next chapter. Good job

Aww. It looks nice and cute. With spike and ember in pink dress. And. This is a great idea im wish my ponyoc. Would join in or not okay also. Who going to be next in the next chapter of this story

9102391
Well...the ending explains that lol. Hint: :pinkiehappy:

9102403
OK. But what top hat is going to do to pinkie pie

9102424
She'll become a puppet. Thats what we have right now.

9102440
Oh OK im never seen puppets before. And im hope its going to be good one I guess. Then after pinkie

9102451
Well more marionettes but still. All the Maine doc get involved at some point and even cmc as seen by the tags

While i like the story, there is plenty of typos. Might want to proof read these before posting

9158163
Sorry about that I’ll look it over a little later.

This thing is DROWNING in errors and typos.

9366708
Yes an update is coming. Just got busy with other stuff and time flew by.

So many typos, i cant begin to correct them all
I think this is a great premise, but trust me when i say spelling is important

9386637
Sorry really need to do a better job with the proof reading

I'm willing to bet top hat is actually Discord.

That pretty good chapter also which pony is next

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Twilight, then AJ and RD and then lastly Fluttershy.

9436103
OK them. What it is twilight going to turn. Into.

9436189
Would t that be spillers. And yeah I really should work on this story again

Eventually curiosity got to me so I had to at least skim what's out.

And it's certainly interesting, though I do hope in the end Top Hat suffers some karma for his actions.

Though at the very least, it's a good thing his magic is temporary, otherwise I'd be very worried

9967447
Thought it was obvious who Top Hat was.

9996965
It pretty much is.
Still want some karma

9996987
Oh I’m sure he’ll get a stern talking to. And yeah it’s a good thing the transformations aren’t permanent not that kind a story

I can't help but think this stallion has intentions. one theory I have is this stallion is actually Discord

9386637
Good news, only took me, what, 4 years? But I did proofread through the story. So uh re-read I suppose. Going to make the Elephant chapter soonish

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