Felix Floetry the Fox is enjoying a peaceful day at home in Ponyville, when Twilight Sparkle suddenly arrives at the door. She tells him that the Mane 6 has been captured by a mysterious new Enemy. She asks him and his close friend Foxy to help her.
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Fuller review here, but in brief: some good potential here, especially in the fight scenes. Unfortunately it's let down by lack of believability (what is a hugely powerful kitsune doing in Equestria in the first place?) and by a very obvious lack of proofreading. Still, despite that, this is better than a number of debut fics I've seen. I wish you well!