After studying the Magic of Friendship for quite a while, Twilight and her friends try to get another assignment from their supervisor. Unfortunately, their supervisor doesn't give a squat about the letters she gets.
Will the Elements find another mentor?
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Overuse of commas. Other than that, I LIKE
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thanks for reminding me about the punctuation. I'm looking back at the story and "'m trying to reduce the number of redundant commas.
Be sure to check out my other stories, and let me know if you'd like to read a chapter 2, if you liked the story!
I am intrigued with where this might be going. It was also funny. I shall to my watch and we shall see.
1010384 A second sounds intriguing.
my small intestines are now on the opposite wall.
Really funny, but I am not sure where you can take this. It feels more like a one shot. I wonder if Twilight and Celestia had text messaging whether Twilight would be constantly bothering her.
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I can take this fic to other, funny places, which have no other purpose than being funny.
I had an idea for another chapter before posting this one anyway.
So much laughter, so much pain in my sides...that was just too awesome! I haven't laughed that much in a while. Great job, and I hope there will be more.
If there isn't more, I will be very sad. 
NO way first! Also this is such a funny and well written story please continue.
I chortled. Pinkie and Dash's letters are the best.
God Rainbow Dash, making me chuckle every time.
Keep 'em coming!
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Told ya.
Gee, I was so proud when I finished this chapter (especially the second PP letter), but gaining recognition here is not an easy task, especially with the top story being an absolute killer.
Over 30 favs deserve another chapter, that's for sure. I think that "straightforward RD" may be a little stale for the third time. I'll try to think of something else to keep things fresh.
Aww yeah, Princess Cadance is getting in on the action! I sure she can handle those "certain questions", right?
This just gets better and better! Seriously, though, I loved AJ's letter. Can someone please invent a way for me to favorite this over and over again?
All of my likes!
Luna should have said, 'Hey AJ I didn't mean to get on your bad side, I meant to get on your back side!'
YEAHHHHH!!!
Omg, the last letter...
Shed.Mov reference, awesome!
Love Fluttershy's letter, "Oatmeal, are you crazy?"
and, I guess you do see more then you want when you use binoculars. Also, this chapter taught me something, don't mess with Applejack. 
Daymn son, shit just went down! Are you gonna take that Cadance?
Wow Candance and Rarity, really getting catty. HA ha.
Hey hey hey, stay out of her shed!
this is really getting good
Catty cadence is best cadence.
MORE!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
I now support LunaJack
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Although AJ is best pony and Luna is best princess, no shipping will ever occur in my fics.
1225492 wasn't referring to this fic, but just in general. I am, however, happy to see it won't be Luna that AJ decides to "Screw with her own horn"
Cadence, prepare yourself
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In due time, when I have the right ideas.
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