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When Twilight Sparkle gets sick with a bad cough, her Father decides to take her to the Doctor. Twilight doesn't like the doctor though, infact she is deadly afraid of him.
Shining Armor, being the good big brother that he was, tries to help his little sister with her phobia.
(This takes place in the past, when Shining and Twilight where still Foals.)
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When is the next chapter?
9091898
I am working on it and hope to post it sometime coming this week.
9091933
Ok. Lets hope Twilight doesn't have anything serious.
Good story, but you did get their genders mixed up a few times
You know... the fandom has done an infinitely better job of showing Shining as Twilight's BBBFF then the show proper. And this is one more example of it. Let's see how chapter 2 goes.
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Wow, i am really honored by this compliment. Thank you.
I'm really enjoying this and can't wit for the next chapter.
One thing I would like to point out is you refereed to twilight as 'he' or 'him' in the chapter several times.
So nice to see Mesme in this. Your OC is one of my favorites.
9097470
Thanksssssss.
9097469
I will look into it.
Glad you like it though
"Let's go get you checked out, Twily," Night Light sighed, trying to pull his younger daughter away from the street lamp. Twilight held on as tight as she could, but his father was stronger.
sex change Twily is OP
9097628
yeah sorry. there are a few errors i made because of my lack of concentration.
I am fixing them though