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October, 2179. The USCSS Alhambra has discovered a distant planet amazingly rich in precious ores and minerals designated as "LV-1349."

Mining goes rather well for about a week or so.
Until the entire crew of the Alhambra vanishes.

With a massive payload worth billions waiting to be towed back, the United States Colonial Marines are called upon to investigate the missing crew and bring the Alhambra back to Earth. Their orders also include avoiding the local equine populace as much as possible... but as we all know, sometimes even the best laid plans can go to waste.

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Marked as "Adventure" because "Action" isn't available.

Colonial Marines from the "Alien" universe x MLP: FIM

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 55 )

1979245
Yep, and a character in the original Aliens.
:rainbowderp: I dunno, I didn't pick it. James Cameron did.

Looks like things are about to kick off...
Can't wait. :rainbowdetermined2:

Fucking Weyland Corporation. It must be one of the most evil companies in fiction, like if the Third Riech went corporate.

I like Weyland Corp. Sound like a nice bunch of people.

Cant wait for more, great story so far.

I've really gotta play colonial marines, make this shit even better :pinkiehappy:

2055546 I think it's only out for console right now, I am so fucking excited for it man, I love the Aliens series.

2055806
The game drops in 1 week, 4 days for all systems.
I've been stalking the release date myself. :pinkiehappy:

How have I not SEEN this before????!

Weyland-Yutani

And I just shat a brick.

This just reminded me of colonial marines that is coming out......oh sha 1week and 4 days I have to start preparing of a night of pure gaming :pinkiegasp:

Stop fucking smoking. Smoking is bad for you. It doesn't make you badass, just stop.
Stop.
STAHP

2055806 I'll be honest, I've never played or seen Aliens series before :twilightblush: only heard of it and seen a couple pictures of aliens before.

This is really good, but there was one problem I noticed; you have a tendency to switch narrative tenses. You'll say 'Luna says' which is present tense, then 'Luna walked' which is past.

2058953 you, my friend are in for one hellova gory and jumpy ride then

2059669
Thank you for noticing.
Early on, I was unsure on what tense to have the story in. I completely forgot to update the first chapter to past like the rest of the fic is.
I made some changes to it, hopefully I nailed those down.

Why didn't the marines use the APC's guns on the changelings instead of retreating. It has a plasma canon and double mini-guns. I doubt they have anything that can penetrate it's armor. Are you using the Colonial Marine Technical Manual ?

That dragon just fucked with humanity.
Nothing fucks with humanity.

2055806>>2055843>>2056439>>2055546 guys if any of you have ps3 add me gingerboy45 we will have a night of prue brony alien gaming xD

2061865 maybe they didnt exspect to get assfucked by a giant fucking dragon nor the sexy changling queen and her minons?

2062622 sorry man got a xbox way more safe in my opinon :twilightblush:

Doesn't an M41A pulse rifle carry 99 round magazines not 95

Woo comments! Lots of them!

2062458
Considering how dropships begin to fall apart after grazing boulders, I think it's safe to say that they are not built for heavy action, lol.

2061865
Why yes I am, as a matter of fact.
The reason for them retreating is even though they have the dual miniguns as well as the cannon, it would have been a tactical mistake to fight the swarm as it was closing in way too fast on their position. The weapons on board the APC are not exactly built for close quarters engagements.

2063002
According to canon lore: Marines much prefer 95 round magazines, as anything more than that can cause magazine and weapon jams.

2062622
Sorry man, I only plan on getting ACM for PC.

2063328 Same, PC is best way to game, if you get it on Steam add me, steam is Zilenan91.

2063328 I got both an Xbox and a PC, Epic gaming!

Comment posted by A fat elephant deleted Feb 9th, 2013

I love you :rainbowkiss:

... and I really want to use that big "W" insignia you made...

But I won't, because I love you :raritywink:

This is one of the better "Aliens" crossovers I've seen. Keep this shit coming, please.

2286743
Thanks!
Haven't given up on it, yet. Real life stuff has been in the way of me making progress on the next chapter. It'll be on the way soon enough.

I've put this in read later stack. Have a gut feeling it will turn out better then the game did. :raritydespair:

How was a dragon able to catch up with a dropship bugging out?

Also, the marines, once they recover their wits, should be a little curious about the Lindsey's comments. I mean the first question is this: "How do you know if it's a male dragon." It's not like a dragon has external genitalia.

It's been mentioned before, but, how is the dragon possibly, even remotely capable of catching something that is designed to break orbit? If this is the UD-4L Cheyenne, why wouldn't it just pop a couple of missiles if for some reason it couldn't just leave a biological creature that relies on wings in the dust? Why wouldn't they use the APC?

2306632
Miss Cartwright's comments will be answered in due time.

2309305
As for the dropship and its speed, the dropship was not even in position yet to break the atmosphere. It had just avoided plowing straight into the face of a mountain. They would have then been preparing to exit the atmosphere, but then the crew had their uninvited guest.

And as to why it didn't use any weapons as well as the APC, I already answered that question a while back. Too many enemies approaching way too fast for an unprepared crew. It would have been a mistake to engage them in that situation.

2311228

Okay, so why didn't they see the massive flying radar signature incoming? Why didn't it just turn and engage if they knew they couldn't get away based on radar?

2315632
The order issued was to get the guys inside of the Alhambra out.

So it's either stay where they were, fight and let the troops on the ground get sandwiched in between two waves of Changelings or get them out and fight another day, preferably one when the ground troops didn't have their pants down.

Yes! I've been looking for this type of fic for 2 months! Thank you!

Nuke the changelings from orbit. That's the only way to be sure.:pinkiecrazy:
Also, calling it now, the docs........ Well,she's probably a *spoiler* or I could be wrong.

You're doing a great job on this. Continue, as this is fantastic. Definitely one of the better Alien crossover fics, and this is coming from an Alien fanboy. :twilightsmile:

It's interesting how you managed to link this to the events of "Aliens" and "Prometheus".

Please don't kill this fic off. It is so hard to find any alien fics yet alone a decent one. So far I consider this a good fic.

the science officer is a changeling THE SCIENCE OFFICER IS A CHANGELING THROW HER OVER!

will this story update soon? I really enjoyed it. :pinkiesad2:

...Weyland-Yutani...

Only Weyland Yutani sends people to planets, only for them to get fucked up by the locals. Every time.
Without fail.
Why would you want to work for these guys? You have the life expectancy of a kitten walking onto a nuclear testing range! Who runs this company, space Hitler?!

Darn shame that this died, I was enjoying it.

Please update! This story is to awesome to die!!!:raritydespair:

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