• Member Since 12th Jan, 2016
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Ashen Heart


Hey guys, just a random person writing for some fun. Stick around and see if you enjoy any of my works, always love to hear feedback. ^^

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During Luna's banishment on the moon, she constantly fights the Nightmare for control. All she wants is to return home to her sister after the already long time of 687 years. Will she be the one to win and return home to her sister, or will the Nightmare break free and take control back from Luna?

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Oooh. 😃 Kinda reminds me of Venom, Idk why XD

9086581
Ooo didn't think of it like tht

9087115
Idk why though, maybe it's just me XD

9087362
I mean, Nightmare Moon controls Luna like Symbiote controls Eddie Brock, but they become one evil character specifically. It's very noticeable, and this story of yours reflects that pretty good. 😄

9087552
Thanks yea I didn't even think of it like that but it does work tht way

9087744
You're welcome, and there's other things I can compare Luna and Nightmare Moon to. Voldemort and Tom Riddle, Anakin and Darth Vader ( kinda ), all of them have the same dark outcome as Luna has if you think about it. 😃😊

9088423
But yeah, your story is pretty good. 😊

In mine, Luna's grandson becomes Nightmare Moon's successor. XD

9091766
Yep. ^^

And you're welcome. :)

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