Citrus Recluse
Joined 4th Jun, 2014 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Citrus Recluse · 16k words · 66 28 · 2.4k views
- Citrus Recluse · 13k words · 108 28 · 5.2k views
- THEJamiboi · 4.1k words · 37 11 · 1.7k views
- Citrus Recluse · 18k words · 98 22 · 4.3k views
- THEJamiboi · 24k words · 31 4 · 1.5k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 3.4k words · 3.1k views
- MightyShockwave · 4.3k words · 35 3 · 705 views
- Nightprincessluna · 21k words · 23 16 · 928 views
Featured In9
Clopfics11,801 stories ·16,013 members
Hypnosis and Mind Control1,685 stories ·3,933 members
My Little Fetish17,382 stories ·8,747 members
- The Snake Pony Group58 stories ·165 members
Lair of the Lamia!73 stories ·331 members
MOONDANCER!166 stories ·313 members
Vore2,012 stories ·1,049 members
Mind break126 stories ·278 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.127 seconds
Total duration
910 users online
59,768 hits today, 1,391,877 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Great work keep it up
Well, the work is...um...different. Though for ME personally, I am a bit confused...you turned a PONY...into a Serpent pony (Lamia)...so you could take PONIES...and make them HUMAN(ized)...so you can "take off their pants (not exactly the most appealing description)" Thats a bit of a stretch for ME to suspend disbelief....
9183930
I think you may misunderstood the intent. The idea is that these are anthro versions of the ponies, like Sonic the Hedgehog characters; rather than the four-legged ponies on the show, these are the same characters, but presented as two-legged creatures with a general human body shape but still retaining pony features like hooves, ears, unicorn horns, snouts, etc.
I kind of hope that during one of these segments, Celestia or Luna turns the tables on the snake ponies.
9186174
Can't say for sure off the top of my head, but I don't think Celestia or Luna are planned to be in this installment.
9186790
I see.
Well, maybe in another installment (if there is one after this)
Great work keep it up
It always feels weird to me whenever I read a hypno fic where Starlight ends up as one of the victims of the hypnosis, even when, like in this case, it serves the overall story.
please i need a update, this story is amazing.
Great work
nice chapter, keep up the good work.
You have Trixie working on herself where I believe she was supposed to be working on Starlight, or was that supposed to be the other way around?
9551551
Could you point out which paragraph(s)?
9551854
I don't know how to pull excerpts. It's while they are still in the bathroom though, I do recall that.
9551854
He meant this paragraph and I think it's the second and thrid mention of Trixie that should be Starlight.
9553516
Should be fixed now!
This is such a cute storyline. I give it a
out of 10.
Great work can’t wait for the next chapter
8 out of 10 fap-worthy.
so, we're nearing the end of any of your MLP work?
There are quite a lot of errors in this chapter. Some of the obvious ones are that at several points Fleur is spelled as Fluer and Minuette as Minutee. I would be interested in reading the actual finale.
9929452
Yes.
9929670
Fixed the names, but you're out of luck on that finale until if and when the commissioner finds someone else.
Nice story, do you know if there will be a sequell?
noo, bro doesn't deserve that
and i was kinda hoping for a male transformation finally
been denied the male transformation yet again
so who commissioned these? i want to find out if they had any more installments made
I don’t like this, I read a little bit of it and it’s awfully gross.