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Cavedragon


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I was just having a normal day, that is until I saved the life of a strange but pretty girl. Now my world gets turned upside down when I get transported to a world that i didn't even think existed. With crazy ponies, monstrous beasts, and just the plain strange and the weard. I have delt with things like this on videogames, but never this real...

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

Please take care spelling because i saw a more than a few mistakes, this mey be another human in MLP world thingy but its the first time ive seen the human be a dragon, this is very good. Liked and faved

I read that description and this came into my head
"Now this is the story all about about how my life got flipped turned upside down..."

Thanks for the comments.

....This...This i like.......And the human thing...is it an invitation for OCs?:pinkiehappy: Oh, and quick suggestion. Go through this with a fine toothed comb, i saw some potential errors. One was "versus", it should be "various".

ya, I see I need alot of help with that. If you know anyone that could help me with that let me know.:twilightsmile:

and the answer to your first question is, maybe. it would be nice you have a few different ocs in my story, but I dont want to be overburdened with the responsibility of putting eveyone that askes me in my story. However, If its a good one, I may put them in, but I would have to talk to the owner of the Oc to get the characters personality right. I don't want to mess anything up.

Sharp Edge ground his teeth before taking the papers in his magic, “this sucks, i bucking hate papperwork”. He took the pappers and pin to a chair and started filling them out. 

umm, paper is not spent like papper :facehoof:
Anyway this was a good chapter, keep up the good work

I detect a few minor spelling errors, but it's okay :raritywink:
Try and get yourself an editor to help you out a little. -faved-

Leroy Jenkins reference WELL DONE!

goddamn 3ds. almost as bad as a barrel.

Comment posted by Savant Sentral deleted Aug 25th, 2013

I read these 6 chapters, and this is what I have to say.
Practice makes perfect. (And a writing class wouldn't hurt.)
The rest of the things I am not going to because they are...
Horrible.

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