I was just having a normal day, that is until I saved the life of a strange but pretty girl. Now my world gets turned upside down when I get transported to a world that i didn't even think existed. With crazy ponies, monstrous beasts, and just the plain strange and the weard. I have delt with things like this on videogames, but never this real...
Please take care spelling because i saw a more than a few mistakes, this mey be another human in MLP world thingy but its the first time ive seen the human be a dragon, this is very good. Liked and faved
I read that description and this came into my head
"Now this is the story all about about how my life got flipped turned upside down..."
Thanks for the comments.
....This...This i like.......And the human thing...is it an invitation for OCs? Oh, and quick suggestion. Go through this with a fine toothed comb, i saw some potential errors. One was "versus", it should be "various".
ya, I see I need alot of help with that. If you know anyone that could help me with that let me know.
and the answer to your first question is, maybe. it would be nice you have a few different ocs in my story, but I dont want to be overburdened with the responsibility of putting eveyone that askes me in my story. However, If its a good one, I may put them in, but I would have to talk to the owner of the Oc to get the characters personality right. I don't want to mess anything up.
Sharp Edge ground his teeth before taking the papers in his magic, “this sucks, i bucking hate papperwork”. He took the pappers and pin to a chair and started filling them out.
umm, paper is not spent like papper
Anyway this was a good chapter, keep up the good work
1315364 its spelt not spent
I detect a few minor spelling errors, but it's okay
Try and get yourself an editor to help you out a little. -faved-
Leroy Jenkins reference WELL DONE!
goddamn 3ds. almost as bad as a barrel.
2967217 for a like.
I read these 6 chapters, and this is what I have to say.
Practice makes perfect. (And a writing class wouldn't hurt.)
The rest of the things I am not going to because they are...
Horrible.