My name is Luna, I have always been a decided woman, and I hated to feel useless. But all the recent events on my life seem to highlight how weak and vulnerable I am:
First one of my students showed to be a nearly sociopath with hunger for power enough to became a She-demon;
After that, a bunch of sirens took control of my mind and again our only hope lied on a small group of students;
Things only got worse when during the friendship games, someone became a She-demon AGAIN!
I am tired of all of that!
Why there is nothing I can do to help those I love?
Why am I always the helpless girl in the story?
AND WHY IN THE WORLD THERE IS A CRACK IN THE SKY JUST ABOVE MY HEAD?
I do not own anything here, Pokemon and My Little Pony and all the characters are owned by Nintendo/Pokemon company and Hasbro respectively. This is just a work made from fan to fan.
Interesting. I had my own idea about Luna being sent to Alola a while back. The difference is that she would be Princess Luna from the NWNW verse.
I'll try and give this a read but honestly I'm not a fan of the first person POV.
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And this is my first try at doing a fist POV too, so even I am not so sure how well this will go.
But I am honestly really happy you are giving me this chance, and I really expect to make up for the expectations.
9374322 I would read that.
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It's on my 'do write list' which keeps on growing sadly. Right now I'm focusing on my Guilt of a Phantom spinoff/based story BUT I do plan on at least writing the first chapters for most of my stories too.
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So I read both chapters and so far I like it but the first person POV just doesn't really work for me. Still though I am looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing Luna's is going to get a starter Pokemon? If she is and it's Litten then please consider giving it an alternate final form cause the whole wrestler look it gets just irritates me to no end.
Ohhh this looks good
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The main reason I am doing a first person POV is because we already have a "neutral" position when playing the game, and exploring their respective characters will be a little more personal that way... I hope... But in the end it was a risk I was ready to take when I started writing, so I am really glad you are giving a chance.
P.S: The next chapter will indeed be when she will choose her starter, and despite I liking Incineroar a lot (Mine already defeated like 8 Arceus in online battles) Litten will not be her choice.
P.P.S: The next chapter will not be all about it, instead will be how she will start to learn abou this "New World".
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Thank you, I am glad you are liking it so far!
Good story so far! Can’t wait for next chapter! :D
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If there is no problem in my life (which I doubt) I intend to write a chapter per week.
P.s: I am glad you are enjoying so far.
93866i hope there is no problem in your life then! :3
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Me too...
Not a bad chapter. I still don't like Hau though, he just annoys the hell out of me.
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Seriously? I will try to work on his character from now on, but I never had anything against him...
But everyone have their opinions, if you do not like him is your right.
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Write Hau however you want to it's story but he was one of the things I didn't like about G7 along with Litten's final form. I also didn't like the RotomDex, the new fishing mechanics and the new plaza thing that replaced the PSS.
Litten's final form is like a slap to the face to the fans that kept on complaining about how 3 fire starters straight became part fighting type. I honestly hope that it gets an alternative form later on for reasons. Hell if I had the skills I would hack my game and given it one.
Hau just annoys me. I'm tried of the overly friendly rivals. Sure he can put up a fight but it feels like a chore rather than something to be hyped about to battle him. Barry and Bianca were alright but G6.... meh.
The RotomDex, good lord was that figuring annoying, really wished it had an off switch. And it really annoyed me that in Ultra they bribed players to use/bond with the thing with it to unlock it's powers.
Sorry for complaining so much but as much as I loved G7 these are five things that really bugged the crap out of me.
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Theo G7 is my favorite gen by a long Shot, but there is no perfection in this world.
The new fishing mechanics were indeed pathetic, and I also had my problems with the Rotomdex (reason why I will not give Luna one) and about the plaza I am like, whatever.
And just out of curiousity, my least favorite generation was the 6th, and yours?
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Hard to say, each gen had something that annoyed me but each made up in others.
G1- A lack of type diversity, AKA only one option for a ghost and dragon type.
G2- Hunting the roaming beasts.
G3- That whole Feebas/trendy saying thing and the boring counterpart rival we got.
G4- The honey tree thing and lacking Pokemon roster
G5- Huh can't think of much really, maybe not being able to battle yourself in the sequel games?
G6- The "rivals" and lack of a legendary trio?
G7- already stated.
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But isn't Incineroar a Fire/Dark type, I thought I heard? Being based on Lucha Libre and being the villain a Heel?
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Yes, he is, but it is a common complain that he does not really "do his job" since he can learn a wild variety o fighting type moves and is a wrestling pokemon and all.
Also most people wanted a quadruped tiger pokemon as starter, and that helped a lot all the hate.
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I see.
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I still see it as a slap to the face. Like a little loophole that a penny-pinching insurance company would exploit so they wouldn't have to pay someone's claim.
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I see. Btw when is the whole Luna is now a kid thing gonna be addressed given the smaller description? Surprised it hasn't been brought up or mentioned yet.
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Well, she is already a kid (A little smaller than Lillie) but she is not going to talk about it with anyone yet.
But I can say it will be a relevant part of the story.
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I see, didn't notice anything mentioning that within the story itself or her commenting about it to herself when she woke up.
That brings to mind:
"Please tell me that you're not going to wear shades on a night mission"
"My vision is augmented."
"At least it is a way that we know it is not paul"
Virtual cookie for those who get that reference.
capable of erasing
Also,
I believe the term you're looking for is "lightweight".
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Thank you for the advice, this is exactly the thing I need help with.
I will fix it as soon as my internet allow me.
Do cracks in the sky appear in the actual game, too?
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Yes, they are called ultra-wormholes, and are basically a gateway to other universes.
At least Hau doesn't have Pinkie's brand of insanity.
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I am not capable to reproduce that.
Heh, Nebby has two moms now.
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I can not believe I never thought about it before...
I am the one writing and somehow this was not intentional... Until now.
Thanks for the wonderful idea.
9598911 It's to be expected when Nebby DOESN'T want to go back in the bag. I've also noticed how Nebby sometimes jumps into Luna's arms instead of Lillie's in some chapters- this one being the latest.
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I will read my entire story again...
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Thank you, I wish I do not disappoint you.
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Never underestimate me partner.
Nebby's gonna have an aunty!
Next?
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I am sorry for being such a stranger, I do not think it was fair with those who wanted to read.
I had some problems here and I could not upload any of my stories (At least I was working on a new one? I do not know if this is good or bad but is one of the reasons). But I will start working right away.
I love how the stupid Skull grunts didn't figure out that it was a zoroa at all.
morons, how could a Brionie use any claw move with 
ing flippers! 
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That is part of the magic of the team skull grunts.
If it was Guzma or plumeria they would have no problem figuring things out and counterattack, but these guys really are not the best Apple of the orchard. They did failed in their island challenge after all. They could be considered "useless", but when you think about how these same guys are such a great family for their leader... It is really cool.
Well, it would be interesting if Celestia joins Team Skull. Why? CONFLICT!tm. That is all.
Another great chapter, I found no spelling or grammer mistakes.
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That would be interesting, indeed, but I admit I never thought about this possibility before.
And about the mistakes... Wow, that is definitely a record. Thank you very much! I know it must be hard for you guys to read my fics given my limitations, so I have a few apps to help me, and I am really glad it is working, even if just a little bit.
Luna already has a Zoroark? I thought it was just a Zorua, did I miss this?
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It was supposed to be a Zoroark, but it is a possibility that I wrote it wrong that chapter. I will look.
the Night and day sisters of CH are back
Let's see if Celestia will adapt just as fast as her sister.