We all know who the Rainbooms are. They're the seven girls at school who formed an awesome band, but more importantly, they all have magic super powers that they use to fight magic evils. But what if they used their powers for... something else?
9142787 I honestly have no idea why I didn't do that. I have no idea why I forgot to use the reply button. Sorry about that. I'm just glad you got my answer anyways.
Ok, gonna be honest, this was very disappointing to say the least it was very short with almost no substance to it. I know Rainbow is the speedster but geez it didnt have to be taken literally. I get that it must have been hard to come up with a concept around her power but honestly i think a scenario where she just shows off her powers would've been enough and than just go onto "sexy time" with her partner, like in Fluttershy's chapter.
9163636 That's all perfectly fair. This was intentionally the shortest chapter of the entire set because:
1. It felt in-character for Rainbow Dash to go from 0 to 100 with no buildup whatsoever. 2. The angle I was going for was "the sex was so hot that the guy couldn't last very long."
That's how I justified it in my mind, but I definitely understand if this chapter felt underwhelming to you.
9164346 Hm. I must say I think it was exactly what I was expecting. I must say I usually don't read straight up porn. I need substance in my readings. That's why I like this storyline. I don't even get aroused as much as I get curious on how the superpowers would affect a person and their lover. And boy do I love RD's idea of sex. It was perfectly in character and the only thing I am not quite sure of is that the protagonist has an unrealistic idea of how he should have performed. The unrealistic expectation, that a man needs to do certain things to be considered a man. Granted, you almost always break with that attitude, because the women quite often have the upper hand, but you still mention it. Nonetheless I liked it quite a bit, even if it was only a quickie (yes, pun very much intended. :D).
Great work.
Addendum: I like how you capture the essence of the mane seven and portray every single Anon differently. None of them felt similar and they all desire the different personalities (yes and bodies, that's ok too sometimes ^^) of the mane 7 and therefore seem like real people and not just porn cardboard cutouts. So kudos.
Why didn't you reply to my comment by hitting the reply button?
9142787
I honestly have no idea why I didn't do that. I have no idea why I forgot to use the reply button. Sorry about that. I'm just glad you got my answer anyways.
Ok, gonna be honest, this was very disappointing to say the least it was very short with almost no substance to it. I know Rainbow is the speedster but geez it didnt have to be taken literally. I get that it must have been hard to come up with a concept around her power but honestly i think a scenario where she just shows off her powers would've been enough and than just go onto "sexy time" with her partner, like in Fluttershy's chapter.
9163636
That's all perfectly fair. This was intentionally the shortest chapter of the entire set because:
1. It felt in-character for Rainbow Dash to go from 0 to 100 with no buildup whatsoever.
2. The angle I was going for was "the sex was so hot that the guy couldn't last very long."
That's how I justified it in my mind, but I definitely understand if this chapter felt underwhelming to you.
9164346
Hm. I must say I think it was exactly what I was expecting. I must say I usually don't read straight up porn. I need substance in my readings. That's why I like this storyline. I don't even get aroused as much as I get curious on how the superpowers would affect a person and their lover. And boy do I love RD's idea of sex. It was perfectly in character and the only thing I am not quite sure of is that the protagonist has an unrealistic idea of how he should have performed. The unrealistic expectation, that a man needs to do certain things to be considered a man. Granted, you almost always break with that attitude, because the women quite often have the upper hand, but you still mention it. Nonetheless I liked it quite a bit, even if it was only a quickie (yes, pun very much intended. :D).
Great work.
Addendum: I like how you capture the essence of the mane seven and portray every single Anon differently. None of them felt similar and they all desire the different personalities (yes and bodies, that's ok too sometimes ^^) of the mane 7 and therefore seem like real people and not just porn cardboard cutouts. So kudos.