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As the demon sleeps, man turns on man, His own blood and madness soon cover the earth. From the depths of despair awaken the Razgriz, Its raven wings ablaze in majestic light...

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Chrysalis attempts to assassinate Princess Celestia. Celestia is thinks the Changeling Queen might have underestimated her power.

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The last part saves this, I feel. Turns it into a comedy piece.

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Fuckin' hell is that real?

Celestia is thinks the Changeling Queen might have underestimated her power.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it!
And one day Chrysalis will be able to beat the game, right?

Edit:
Congratulations for second place in the Feature Box!


Found a typo:

Weapon pointed, she changed Celestia

That should be "charged", right?

Why do I suspect when Chrysalis starts to get the hang of nightmare moon showing up then Daybreaker will show up, followed by evil versions of the other Alicorns just as she starts to get used to that?

The first comment should have been “NANI?!” and I’m sorely disappointed that it wasn’t.

9072906 I don't believe it's a legit OC, no.

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I looked up blood skull boi and it seems that he just made that as a joke because the only thing there is a pic of a skeleton riding a toy motorcycle with a caption saying that we probably expected a sonic oc but got him as a skeleton instead.

personaly a jotaro refrence would have been funnier, but still pretty good.

So... MLP Dark Souls?
*cracks knuckles*
LET'S DANCE, BITCHES!
MEET MANUS!

On cue, the screen glowed shit as dream Celestia it her horn and the sky behind her erupted in flame...

I'm terrified to imagine that brown glow. Also Celestia probably lit her horn.

“OH COME ON!” Chrysalis shouted as she was showed with exploding comets.

Showered?

Pssh... Nothin personnel kid...

No one caught this?:

On cue, the screen glowed shit as dream

9073554
well if you were a radioactive sun pony wouldnt your shit glow from the radiation too

9073250
Why does America never come up with shit like this for commercials?

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9073554
This is what happens when you don't get Grammerly on your phone :facehoof:

Do you feel it Chrysalis? The future, the future is burning Blue.

This hoof of mine glows with an awesome power!

Its burning glow tells me to defeat you!

TAKE THIS!

MY LOVE, MY ANGER, AND ALL OF MY SORROW!

SHINING HORSESHOE!

Celestia is thinks the Changeling Queen might have underestimated her power.

That is isn’t necessary is it?

I'm curious as to whether or not people actually understand what the Japanese means.

Well, it's a pretty widespread meme, so I guess that the average Internet roamer would know at least that.

First, fourth, and seventh "your" should be "you're"

Dear 3D person. I would love to have some of the narcotics that you are taking so that i too may write good stories like yours!

9073328
Look up sparkledogs.

mrk

3 edgy 5 me

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So I don't think I've ever mentioned it on this site but can I just say that I hate the internet?

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Just about died at that part because I really didn't expect Chrysalis to go word for word.

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I didn’t even know they actually said that until I read it.

You need an editor the grammar is terrible. But the story is amusing none the less.

Why can I never escape this phrase?

9074679
Because once people become obsessed with a meme, they don't want to let it die in peace.

On cue, the screen glowed shit as dream Celestia it her horn and the sky behind her erupted in flame

What the FUCK does this sentence mean.

Nothin personal, kid, but this story needs some grammar checks...

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Yeah, I know. Wrote this entire thing offline while using my shitty phone without spellchecker and autocorrect had a field day and I wasn't able to catch everything.

Comment posted by YawRaw deleted Jul 29th, 2018

So they've created a simulation chamber to train Chrysalis to become a superweapon. I don't think they've thought their endgame through.

Please stop reading this this garbage story XD

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Its already read.

H- how did I get cut?

9073250
GDI Japan, why are you so awesome?

ゴゴゴゴ

Wait...













is this a Jojo reference?

9075490
Actually.... no. Not this time.

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What was it SUPPOSED to say?

9074679

*Phrase teleports behind you*

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I'll be honest I got no idea

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Very true my friend. Very true. *glares at a list of memes I hate that just won't die*

This is a very good one-shot. I loved the last thing that Chrysalis said , Oh come on.

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