Haven't you heard of the tale? The one that happened before Equestria was safe and sound? There once was a little filly.... broke her horn, lost her pony pals, and made revenge sound less sweet.
This filly turned into a 'big bowl of sweet, cold revenge' referred to a saying that Pinkie Pie uses, but with more ice cream. Like they say, revenge is best in a dish served cold.
This is a story about the time..when chaos roamed.
*Thanks to the original story of Cupcakes and for 'blueskies' to have his OC become Ying's gory apprentice*
Chapters (8)
.... i absolutely love this stories style really really adds to the mood. i also love ying yang as a character, she is like how i wanted "chimera"the pony ,to come across tortured, lonely,scared. i don't think i quiet pulled it off bu you definitely did
SO HUSK LIKE IN SO MANY WAYS I LOVE THAT!!!!!*SQUEEEEEEE*
keep working on this story its amazing
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Lol! First fanfic, I'm glad you liked it!
1003741 THIS IS YOUR FIRST ONE?!?!
also did you like my new chapter?
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I didn't like it...
I LOVED IT!!!
1004237 did you like scraps?
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Didn't really understand about scraps, but anyways, I liked the way Rainbow Dash was jealous.
1004317 i intend to make her relationship with blue skies kinda comedic and as awkward as possible, like the ultimate friend zone
lol, I started laughing at that point.
This...is really good. A very promising start! ying's a great character (cool design as well) and it'll be interesting to see where this goes.
THere are a few awkward turns of phrase " In her most royalest voice of hers" for example, and A over use of commas. (I do that as well) but nothing to bad.
Great work. THUUUUUUUUMBS up.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Lol! For some reason, I typed the next chapter and edited it, and I got the same number of words from the last chapter!
1017810 BWAHAHAHAHAH fluttershy got OWNED!
. also DAYUM ying is messed up..but i sympathize with her. 
man she would be a good friend of green wood
,greenwood wants to kill celestia luna, and pretty much everyone and everything except the trees he wants a peaceful, silent world. free of violence and pain, he wants a pure world were everything is clean. greenwood is a tree pony as in he is a pony made out of a tree and other plant life. he enjoys murder of non plant life and he like the feel of pony blood...yeah he is ONE CREEPY TREE
also ying reminds me of albito from xenosaga
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Lol! Thanks, im glad you liked it.
Oh, and in the next chapter, im thinking of a list of things to do to fluttershy:
Kill her
Lock her up
Make her live
Lol, which should I choose?
1018584hmmmm hard choice i wanna say kill her..but locking her up is always fun, i dunno its a tossup between those two for me
1018616
I know!
I'll lock her up THEN kill her!
1018637 YAAAAAAY! stillthinkgreenwoodwouldbeanawesomesidekickforying .....
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Maybe I should put him IN the story?
1018650 MAAAAAAYBE...
i have a pic of him..
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Lol, if you want me to put him in then i'll do it,
But, if you don't want me to do it, it's fine!
1018679 i don't care either way
"butifyoudidputhiminthatwouldbeawesome"
1018686
Well, ok!
I just need details that would show the readers who he would be to help.
1018691 well he is a psychotic tree pony and avatar of folendra. he rebels against folendra and lets darkness consume his heart wood. he takes glee in murder and torturing animals, and likes the taste and feel of pony blood and bones. but his over arching goal is to eradicate the gods and their creations leaving only plants and trees. he feels that animals are too loud and violent and is determined to destroy everything that his creator...created except for trees and plants.
his ability's are all the ability's of a unicorn plus he can"free" tree's and turn them into tree ponies all of which share his mind. and since he made a pact with daegon the daemon king he can mutate int a daemon thingy..a thing like that daemon the mane six the doctor and derpy fought in the everfree
I'll say it again.
Rayless and Ying? MADE for each other.
Nice chapter.
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Lol, I just wanted to say:
I REALLY just felt like ying should slap some pony in the chapter.
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I think she's probably quite nice once you get over the schizophrenia
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Lol, She's only nice when every pony is dead xD
Especially Celestia...
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Well Celestia is being a bitch.
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Talk about breaking Ying's horn xD
AAAW YEAAAH green wood the psycotic tree pony
but a wheee bit gruesome kinda cupcakesy but with fluttershy which makes it less bad
not where i thought this story was going..but okey...i still like it
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Lol, but I just love what just happened
If only fluttershy could do this:
AAAAWWWW snap
see this is what i was talking about, good story not just pointless violence good job keep it up
also green wood is probably starting to get hungry right about now, some guard might just make a good meal for him
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Lol, I'll try to remember that and give him a few guards to snack on.
DAYUM ying has got gutz shutting the mouth of a 3.5 billion year old demigod spirit, who could rip her to shreds at any moment
WELL DONE!
WELL DONE INDEED! nice ending very VERY nice, you began to slip a little bit but the ending was REALLY nice also nice representation of greenwood i wasn't sure if you would catch that about him from my story
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Heh, thanks! For a second there, I thought you were offline
I am proven wrong
1355034 im writing the first chapter of ties
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Another new story?
1355914 sort of but its not really "new" as much as not started until now..it the sequel to stormclouds
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Oooh! Nice!
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