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TwiwnB


30 years old closet brony from the center of Europe. Just happily doing my thing in my corner of the internet.

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Twilight is working late, as always. She had always worked hard to help others, and as the princess of friendship, she has to work extra hard to ensure everyponies' happiness.

It's just... sometimes working very very hard isn't enough.

And Twilight learns it as she get some bad news.

[that story is just an alternate version of this story: " https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415250/1/deep-depression/let-it-all-out " by UnicxrnPxnk. I just felt like I wanted to do my own alternate version and I ran with it.]

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Pretty far away, in the middle of Ponyville, Twilight reappeared from her teleporting spell. Her hooves felt dizzy, her head was spinning a tad bit, but she regained control. She knew where she was, he knew where she was going, she knew what she had to do.

Not to be super nitpicky, but wouldn’t it make more sense to say “her hooves trembled” instead of “felt dizzy”? I don’t think hooves have the quality of being dizzy since dizziness is felt in the head. Again, I know this is kinda silly to point out but I just felt like bringing this up. :raritywink:

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