Chrysalis knew she couldn't drain Equestria of its love without the help of her subjects, despite her hatred of admitting weakness, and that Thorax's position as the current leader of the Changelings had no end in sight. With few other options, Chrysalis tried her best to recreate the complex batch of DNA that nearly fits the exact structure of all Changelings. She used her own venom, though the product of her work is not what she expects . . .
Comments are always appreciated, and I'll respond back to each one. I hope you enjoy the story!
I feel like this is in need of a comedy tag.
that is so adorable
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Perhaps . . . I guess I'll see where it goes first!
I don't consider myself good a writing jokes!
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Thank You!
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Even a weak comedy is still a comedy
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You really think it was funny?! Thanks so much!
And you get a follow for this. Great work!
That was....nice, probably better than it would have been if the pokemon was a former human, which was actually what I hoped for a little bit.
Long story short you suprised me in a good way.
In the end I kind of image Chrysalis to throw a letter in Celestias face that tells her she surrenders, at least from all her plans to kill her and just goes away again. No matter what happens with Ditto I hope she isn't changing her colour.
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Woot Woot!
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I'm not quite sure where all of this is going to end, so I guess you'll see . . .
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True, but that's not why she felt off. Read it again . . . perhaps that will help!
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I'm sorry! I have so many other stories that I'm Working on!
Ditto is a Pokemon that has the ability to shift into other Pokemon and use their abilities and attacks (Similar to the Changelings). However, some Ditto have trouble with changing their own facial structures, like the one in the story, making it obvious that they're importers. I hope that helps!
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Yay!
Duplica, please retreve your Ditto.
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When your dreams fall in front of you because of someone else. I'm sorry Duplica, keep working to build those dreams back up.
IT's good so far. I'll be sure to enjoy the complete chapter
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Yay!
Hi, how big are the chances for another chapter?
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How much do you want another?
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Well as far as I remember this is about Chrysalis trying to creat a weapon to fight the ponies or something but in her eyes Ditto is acting rather stupidly right?
Well I think at the moment I could really use another fun story to read once in a while, I'm just not sure where I would like the story to go.
I was thinking about them sooner or later meeting the ponies and trying to attack them once in a while only for Chrysalis to give up because of whatever Ditto would do in those situations.
Maybe Ditto ends up with them for a while before they know what it is supposed to be?
Just in chase I have to say I don't want it enough to pay anything on patreon or stuff like that, I don't really like that side to much or the paying method /programm.
The question just made me remember the "pay me and I write" guy I had seen once.
That and I remembered how more or less common patreon.
Long story short, yep I would be happy to see it since I have good memories about it.
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Then perhaps I will! I was, in no way, asking for money, by the way!