Ten years has gone by. Who could believe it right? I mean, this time last year I was just Pipsqueak, I had no cutie mark to speak of, and no tother talent I lent myself to what so ever. Now look at me! Snips got tall, and Snails looks good. Apple Bloom took too much after her sister, and Sweetie Belle... Well... She always looked good. I heard Scoots might not make it, wouldn't blame her, doesn't sound like the wonderbolts get much down time.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Plenty of grammer errors. Please don't hate me.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Pretty sure I fixed it.
Chapters (1)
Please get a proofreader.
Let's see...
You misspelled Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle, and forgot to capitalize both Pipsqueak and Snails.
Given the quality of the description, I'd rather not read this.
Good idea, just...
Executed a little badly.
I enjoyed it. Sure there are things that can be nitpicked, but as of itself, I enjoyed it. It was a very nice story, and I have a smile on my face as I just let myself see the story in my head.
I'll put this on my RIL list.
*pipsqueak
*sweetie belle
*uncapitalised "sounds"
kinda sad Sweetie belle is spelled wrong everytime
Yeah, sorry about all the terrible grammatical issues and misspelled pony names... I started the story and I worked on it then forgot to save it and that happened so many times
and it was all my fault and yeah... I'm in desperate need of a proof reader... Gonna go back and fix it...Sorry
Snails is getting married to Diamond... and Silver and Snips?
