[A second-person sensual fiction starring you and Fluttershy.]
When a bolt of lightning turns a casual trot through the Everfree Forest into a disaster, you are taken in by none other than Ponyville's kindest mare: Fluttershy. But is your mutual relationship just that of a patient-caregiver, or is it actually something more...?
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great story :)
Very Nice, but thoughts should always be in italics
And Fluttershy seem a bit OOC during this part, imo.
Fluttershy, however, was not fooled, as her animals had pulled this trick before in a vain attempt to gain her attention. Fluttershy takes a few hesitant steps forward, leaning her head down to you, her breath tickling your ear. “Don’t do this,” she says quietly.
You stand up quickly in surprise. So much for pretending to be hurt. “Do what?” you say.
Fluttershy brushes her mane out of the way and says quietly, barely able to meet your eyes, “If you wanted to see me again, you didn’t have to pretend to be hurt like this…”
You somehow manage to be shocked that she was able to deduce your brilliant plan so easily. “But, but-” you stutter.
“You could have just talked to me, you know,” Fluttershy says with surprising confidence.
You facehoof at your idiocy, instantly regretting it due to the wave of pain it brought, feeling like an utter fool.
Fluttershy brings her snout close to your ear once again and whispers breathlessly, “How about we just go on a trot and talk about this instead?”
Still flustered, you nod furiously.
Decently done, but I think the build-up...was non-existant. Maybe it's just me, maybe not...
Can I be Rainbow Dash, cuz this is second person, and you know... Flutterdash is fucking awesome and canon.
very nice story.
i Demand a Sequel
oh...but whatever you wanna do is...fine
still liked it nonetheless
Loved it! Made me smile!
It was really cute.
And well written.
And awesome.
Great job!
I enjoy this. MORE! *throws fic onto ground and breaks it*
Aww, this was a good read.
Our character's a bit of an idiot, though.
Reading of this fic here www.youtube.com/watch?v=dFXATJ8qO0w
This was an awesome story! Why is the tag "sex" though?
The ending was really cute. Fluttershy is my favourite pony. ^_^
5772767 tis was awsome
My OC is a unicorn who sharpens his horn. All I can see at this part is him falling on his head, then getting stuck because his horn is stuck in the ground!
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The Rarispy! You're here?! Wow! I'm so honored to read something you also enjoyed! You are my favorite author here! Your brilliance in the gem trilogy and somehow making all those loose strings come together and even the forgone ones and once they are tied together everyponys like mindblown. Your work is pure genius. You and phantomshadow both are great. (But you were his inspiration. )
very nice work. I only saw one mistake. You put typically when you only needed typical. I assume autocorrect. Very well written. And extremely adorable. So adorable i feared for my life. (I thought i was going to have a heart attack.)
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Hey, thanks! Funny enough, this was so long ago I forgot about this one entirely. So, thanks for inspiring another read, and I'm glad you enjoy my stuff.
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Thanks! You have a great day! And great life!
Isn't the Everfree weather rogue, and therefore impossible to schedule or maybe even predict?