Becoming a Wonderbolt Reserve is probably the best thing that's ever happened to Rainbow Dash, and she doesn't want her party celebrating it to end. Fortunately Pinkie Pie won't rest until Rainbow Dash decides the party's over. And she hasn't said that yet.
But how should two ponies carry on partying when the rest of the party has gone home? Pinkie Pie knows the answer: a race. In the end there's more on the line and on Dash's mind than simple celebration or victory, though.
Cover art by mister-hand. Regrettably their DeviantArt account is now inactive.
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Bonny stuff! Pinkie and Dash are both handled really well here, the interplay between the pair of them's great, and the descriptions and scene-setting are on-point.
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Thank you Carabas! Pleased you liked it. A compliment means a lot coming from a writer such as yourself.
(PS cuboid-Rarity remains the best thing aaahhhh)
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Me active? What about you and your imminent return?!
To be honest, I'm not active... I could write a lot on that topic through the lens of this story in particular, and maybe I will, in a blog. It would probably be awful to read though. I think I'd have to write it at least partially in an emoji/gif format to order to adequately express all of my "???!!!
???" feelings about writing these days.
Then again I've said it all before to you so at least you wouldn't have to read it
What you call a "nitpick" is actually 100% fact haha. I'm very happy you still found stuff to like in the story, thank you so much for your comments. Although I'm sorry my first published foray into shipping is with the terrible Rainbow Dash and even moreso that you liked it.
I'm sure you just like it because it has Pinkie in it though. Eh? Eh?
Wonderful. Very pretty description.
Very enjoyable and I love the interplay of Dash and Pinkie.
Such a cute and warm little story. Nice work!