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Meeting in Manehattan

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kalash93

kalash93 #1 · Jul 15th, 2018 · · 1 ·

You need an editor.

Estrus Season

Estrus Season #2 · Jul 15th, 2018 · · ·

9047279
Any examples of errors you found in it?

TheBroJangles

TheBroJangles #3 · Jul 16th, 2018 · · ·

Now I'm just left wondering what happens to Jet! His wife is leaving him for his new boss because he's sterile and not as big? That's gotta be devastating. I sincerely hope he recovers and meets someone who really loves him.

Wolfman32