This is great so far! I really love stories where bdsm relationships are shown that aren’t “always on” So to speak, and the little bit with rarity checking in with Coco was wonderful!
I do think rarity throwing the drink into trilogy’s face may have been a bit uncalled for though, given just how new princess Twi seems to be and how she was genuinely, actually unable to do those instructions correctly due to her lack of knowledge.
9050560 I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far! I try my best to accurately portray these kind of relationships and it's nice to hear that people enjoy it.
As for you're critique, it's totally valid. In my opinion, that course of action was a bit extreme but I also found it a little hot , hence why I included it.
This took Sunset only a couple of minutes, as she had pre-purchased a couple of snack platters. Along with this, she pulled out a bottle of pinot grigio, a bottle of shiraz, some Beefeaters gin, and a couple of darker craft beers.
Not only does Sunset have great taste in people, she appreciates good drink too.
This is great so far! I really love stories where bdsm relationships are shown that aren’t “always on” So to speak, and the little bit with rarity checking in with Coco was wonderful!
I do think rarity throwing the drink into trilogy’s face may have been a bit uncalled for though, given just how new princess Twi seems to be and how she was genuinely, actually unable to do those instructions correctly due to her lack of knowledge.
Alright, I'm in.
9050560
I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far! I try my best to accurately portray these kind of relationships and it's nice to hear that people enjoy it.
As for you're critique, it's totally valid. In my opinion, that course of action was a bit extreme but I also found it a little hot , hence why I included it.
9050983
Good to have you aboard.
please if you ever include rainbow in it, dont make her a sub, there are already to many storis with that.
and great story so far love it
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Glad to hear you love it. Also don't worry rainbow dash makes an appearance.
Only slightly sweet this one is :O I'd have to say this is the first one that I've found that doesn't make me just absolutely dopey.
I love it <3
Not only does Sunset have great taste in people, she appreciates good drink too.
I'm absolutely loving the banter side of the story.