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One day in class while having a discussion about snakes Smolder tells Gallus about the time she once ate a snake whole. Curious to see if she can swallow something bigger than a snake Gallus asks Smolder to eat him " he doesn't have a vore fetish he's just curious to see what it feels like" 😉
This was a story request from Supernova2015
Art by pony throat
Warning: This story contains vore. Rated M just in case.
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The color green.... for a dragon stomach acids. Hmmm... interesting???? It reminds me of drinking mountain dew with all that great sugar of 47 grams.
It's good, but needs more ","s.
The expression is "Curiosity killed the cat", so the title should be "Curiosity Swallowed the Griffin". Description is also lacking some commas.
As for the story itself, oh Celestia it seems like it had no editing at all, so many problems:
The story doesn't flow too well due to the many mistakes, the constant breaks in the early bits (it's only 2k words, hardly justifies much skipping around), and the rather rushed nature of the whole thing.
Also, I feel the cover image is a more interesting scenario with its misunderstanding than what the story presented.
I know some of you hate it, but I'm editing it.
It will be fixed in no time.
Messy
"hole"
plz continue!
The fuck did I just read!? XD
Gallus isn't a dragon, which they are talking about. Smolder saying "Only wimps need to chew" in this context implies ENTIRELY that it would be DRAGONS that were wimps if they needed to chew. Why would Gallus take offense to her stating that???
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Most vore images and animations I've seen depict digestive acids as either a glowing-green or perhaps an off-white color. I guess at this point it's tradition.
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Actually, Smolder said no offense because she called Gallus a wimp.
Why would someone want to know what it's like to get eaten?
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k. my mistake.
Good story, but look at all the misspellings.
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Morbid curiosity, maybe? In my younger years I was curious to know what it felt like to be struck by lightning.