9044529
Maybe

9044534
No I’m sly

9044534
Wait a minute... How the fuck you read it so fast it took me all day to write that

9044572
No

9044572
Anyways how have you been

9044593
So what do you think of the chapter

9044605
Alright

letters

Tried figuring out why they would send fucking letters then I realized it was Ladders xD that mistake is throughout the writing.

Probably 100 gallons had died already

100 Gallons of what?

9044706
You always know how to find my mistakes don’t you.

9044708
Well you need someone :3

9044710
Should be all fixed and yes I do

“What do you mean the armies in retreat again” I shouted at my idiotic Captain.

Army is sounds better :P

“No your majesty I bet you to-“ he was interrupted with my sword going through his throat.

Beg?

9044744
I hate being a solo author

9044748
Good thing I'm Here!

9044749
Do you know the one problem about making a long chapter.

The fucking editing

9044755
Yes it is a pain

9044757
You know I made the chapter in one day

9044759
I can't make mine in one week :P

At Least you got a chapter out :3

9044765
That reminds me when is the next chapter for “the last one”

9044768
Next chapter for "The Lost One" will be out soon :3

9044770
You tease

9044773
I would go into detail but I'm saying this were people could read it :3

9044774
I understand

9062443
your welcome (gives hugs if it's allowed) and seriously, i do love this story, and i really hope you continue with what your doing. also, hope life is good to you and your family!!

9062445
Don’t worry just because a few people (and I know who) disliked it is not even close to stopping me from continuing this book. And I hope everything is going well with your family (hug accepted)

9062469
yay!!

9062476
So what do you like and what you dislike about my story

9062525
likes: how this guy will do whats right, isn't a racist fuck, celestia and luna aren't racist speciest and he truly cares for the people (as in ponies, changling, etc)
dislikes: some of your grammar ( you deferentially need a grammar nazi), pacing is abit hectic like sometimes it's slow and romancing thing, than later it's fast pace. just relax and do you.
other than that, be yourself, and do your best. we are all supporting you.

9062571
Alright

9062571
What do you think of Green Flame and Eric

9062631
green flame is adorable, and awesome, a little shy but i assume that she will get more like a warrior queen or something. and for eric....please don't let him die. make him like the first ever cyborg medieval style or if you've played shadow or mordor/war lotr game, than do something like the machine orcs do.

9062647
Why does everyone think he’s going to die. he only lost his fucking hand which Alex healed. (I forgot about his eye)

9062647
I love that game series

9062649
nooo he made a fricken stump and he got stab in the eye, and maybe the brain. i get foxy boi has healing powers but he's still getting use to them....unless there was a training montage i don't know about?

9062655
Don’t you remember at the end of the chapter

9062651
plus alot of blood lost

9062657
i do remember and i'm sorry if it sounds like i'm nagging, it's just the first thing i thought and he just got a name and he was very epic and all so...yeah

9062662
I’m only joking around with you, I actually thought many people wouldn’t like Eric

9062663
well, i love the guy as a brother and hope he becomes even more of a brother in arms badass and gets a lover.....or two (suggestive wiggling of eyebrows)

9062667
I haven’t thought much of what I was going to do with Eric but his journey is going to be a lot in common with Alex

9062671
sooooo....a brother in law????? or something???????

9062667
Oh did you watch the trailer (or read)

9062673
Alex doesn’t have a sister...... well that you know of

9062674
.....no. i'm ashamed to admit that i just saw the sequel and just went to it.....is the trailer needed or something??

9062677
No it explains of what going on

9062681
well i will read in a little bit than....i am watching cloverfield right now

9062684
What’s that a fanfiction or movie/ TV show

9062685
movie on showtime on demand

9062688
I might have to check it out