In an alternative universe... Twilight is a red guardian, a group of powerful people protecting the innocent. And one day after trying to stop a great evil, she was betrayed by one her red guardian friends and was sent to another world, that world being Equestria. (The version of Equestria is anthro ponies. and Twilight is a human). She loses her memories, and lives in Equestria is a dragon name Spike. And she starts little by little to get her memories back and feels happy living in Equestria.
Cover by Traupa https://www.deviantart.com/traupa
Chapters (36)
All I can say is, a good start my brony friend
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Thanks.
This really reminds me of the Watchmen in the best possible way
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Really how?
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I think it's the mane 6
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Oh. I don't see it. Unless of course Twilight is doctor Manhattan
Will give this a read.
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Fluttershy looks like Silk Spectre
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Don't worry I'll put her in a green sweater in the next chapter
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no, it's fine. I'm not complaining
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okay
this is really good
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Thanks. Did you like the backstory?
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yeah. I like it gives it the alien feeling just like Superman
I really enjoy reading this. And i don't mind the few spelling mistakes i once read a book series and all of them had mistakes that were made by a professional writer.
I find it kind of strange that they regonize that she is a girl. And a earths guardian not carrying a gun? Even soviet cosmonauts carried guns into space but that's of topic. Keep up the good work i cant wait to keep reading this.
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Ok
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Yeah. Sorry about that. Some spelling were because of stupid autocorrect
fascinating to be sure... I like what I've seen so far!
i found this error in the description
I think you meant lives in Equestria with a dragon named spike
Awesome!
crush
destroying
you know i was expecting more of a freak out
hear
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Oops. My bad. stupid autocorrect
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its okay
I hate to say this but when u say she owns a home it is spelled her home.
We? Do you mean she? Because We means that the one who is talking includes others who she/he is with as one who do/want the same thing.
this story seems good and I will continue reading this.
that fight was entertaining but i think Twilight could have easily won that if she was able to lift pinkie up without touching why did she not do the same for Rainbow Dash? like lifting her to few kilometers and then making her crash to the ground.
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Cause Twilight knows that Rainbow Dash is jealous so she didn't bother using her telekinesis. She's secretly going easy on Rainbow.
is this a twixspike story or a random randomness ?
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Yes. It is a twixspike story.
Awesome!
9054250 something like this is how I won first place in the Valentine's day contest when I was a kid.
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Really? Wow
wow
That was unexpected. I think u could have included that beach part into it's own chapter. And that part where you were describing twilight's physique the abs part could have been written as "her abs were visible" or something. Because saying she had abs could also mean that they aren't visible like a six pac in the picture u drew. Keep up the good work.
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Okay.
Thanks for the advise
...What the heck is Applejack wearing in the cover art?
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its a one piece suit
Wow
oh dear......... I can see some people not liking that picture.....
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If you like I can take it off
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its your choice really, but i would wait to see if others feel the same way... though it is unnerving
Yeah that picture is kind of disturbing but i'm fine with it. Do as you like to do with it but if u get contacted and someone asks to remove it. You should do as they asked because they might find it even disturbing than I did. Great chaper anyway.
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I have a plan B for that... people don't want this. I'll draw the sequence myself.
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too many freakouts
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there's a lot of auto corrects
k i got to ask, Will Nightmare Moon/Luna get punished after all this or not e a slap on the wrist everyone forgives forget? Because I just don't see that being possible.
mother of god....
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some may be forgiven. But they still need to pay for their misdeeds to be completly forgiven. Luna will be punish. And she will accept it if she wants a second life.
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getting dark now.