"...what did I just even read." - Wintermist || "Pour la beauté du geste" || ooo || π
Sunset Shimmer had everything one could ask for. Celestia's best student, wielder of the element of magic, recently crowned alicorn princess of friendship. Everything was perfect.
Then why did it feel wrong?
This was her calling, her destiny. This was the life she was meant to live.
Was it not?
Why did the world around look so alien to her?
Why did it feel like somewhere, somewhen, something had happened the wrong way?
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I am officially intrigued. Tracking.
...There are so many theories I have for what's going on right now. And they are probably all wrong.
Isn't that the artwork Chengar Qordath uses for all of his stories?
Hmm evil mysterious version of sunset trying to 'fix' things it seems that sunset and twilight need a hero to set things right... They have to be strong, they have to be fast and they have to be fresh from the fight...
...holy shit. damn. wtf. insert other expletive here.
there are no words that describe my feelings right now.
mind blown
This story is making me feel sooooo uncomfortable! I love it! This is like a Tim Burton movie in how surreal this is!
...this story was already surreal as fuck. And then you give an ending like this that not only turns what we thought we knew on its head, but just increases the surrealist mindfuckery while leaving more questions, practically no answers to questions we already had, and the burning desire for MORE.
Bravo.
Well I will certainly say this is a rather depressing story that certainly earned its tragedy, random and dark tags.
Sunset was a pretty fucked up character when she first got introduced.
Good story, but damn that's dark!!
And, in the space between spaces, a spare part flies out for eternity...
At least, until it hits another assembly. Won't that be interesting?
In any case, brilliant work. The prose gets a bit overstuffed with modifiers at times, but the story easily shines through the bloat. A great piece of surreal, tragic horror. Thank you for it.
Brilliant, this story is just wonderful. Sunset creating a whole new universe to force Sunset to live a life she thinks she deserves, making her (princess Sunset) just another piece of the puzzle, playing her part without even knowing it. Bravo
Where's Luna?
Seriously though, I don't understand in the slightest why unicorn Sunset, as selfish as she is, is CONTENT TO MAKE A PRINCESS SUNSET AND JUST WATCH HER LIFE GO ON.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!