Back to the Present...
The cloaked figure said this, when she heard a voice call her name
"When the Pharaoh leaves this world. The Plana will be granted, shall he ever return the Plana will be recanted. A prophecy that has come true. When the Pharaoh left this world, we've gained the Plana, the very power to remake the world into some place grand."
She looked to her side to see another cloaked figure.
This cloaked figure said "you mustn't give into your dark urges, sister. Good cannot grow from Evil. That is what Master Shin taught you or have you forgotten his teachings?"
Okay, you seriously need to work on this story. I like what you've done, but please make these chapters longer so that it doesn't feel like they come and go so fast.
Why did you make the chapters so short?