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Cutie mark crusaders: taking time away from the mane six before starlight and the young six made it cool

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Emi "Ember" Hakike is not the largest or strongest of the Crystal Perp girls, but hey, that never stopped anybody else.

When hockey season comes to Canterlot City, she's ready to put her skills on the ice to good use and prove her dad wrong. She's prepared for anything the Ice can throw at her.

Except for maybe overly affectionate and clumsy goaltenders, a shrill-voiced jack-of-all-trades, (metophorical) demons after her family, morally dubious drifters, morally dubious headmasters, morally dubious teammates, and a kind-of rivalry with an overly competitive uber-athlete who also has someone to prove herself to.

Oh, and there's also the occasional racist joke here and there.

Cancelled and currently being rewritten


Takes place squarely in between Rainbow Rocks and Friendship Games


Rated T for occasional racial or sexual humor that would fly over the head of a younger audience.


Graciously and Painstakingly Edited by Pabrony83

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Comments ( 16 )
Comment posted by MJP deleted Jul 8th, 2018
MJP

chapter title is referring to this song

MJP

9034620yes, it's smoulder, Spike is still a dog in my continuity, though that may be subject to change in stories that take place after LofE and the 'Magic' specials

and remember this is the LADY Wondercolts and unnecessarily gender-neutral anything isn't exactly seen as a good thing (2018 MTV Movie Awards, anyone)

MJP

9034620
also if spike were human I'd give him the same last name as Twilight and Shining (Spino in my continuity cause Night Light is asian) for obvious reasons

MJP

9034907
no, it's just something asian sounding I came up with,

also, Ember is full-blooded Japanese while Night Light is of Cantonese/Hong Kong descent

Comment posted by MJP deleted Jul 9th, 2018
Comment posted by MJP deleted Jul 9th, 2018
MJP

9034907
"magic" translates to "mofa" (pronounced Mow-fah) in simplified chinese

do you think that'll work better

MJP

9034950
ok, you ever watched hockey? I’ve seen a few games during olympics time but I want to make sure I‘m not getting details wrong, like what calls for penalty time and shootouts

having only six mentioned on the roster instead of the actual 20 for hockey was intentional, as I didn’t want to introduce or make up too many characters for the dual protagonists to interact with

MJP

9034974
ok, I’ll ask around and watch Ninh Ly’s video on Ice Hockey, then.

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