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Hear that Rarity! We won't let our fashions lead us to folly!
Now that song is stuck in my head.
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I'm sitting here humming it now.
This whole chapter...I don't even know what to say.
Bravo doing most of this chapter from Robby's perspective. From The Lorax to trying to be considerate of the monster under the bed it was a wild trip through the perspective of a night pony foal.
Seriously, if they don’t start using neutral terms like people, everyone, someone and anyone in mixed company all they’re going to do is drive a wedge and make things worse in the long term.
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Pretty sure it is force of habit. Blessing had said she was considering encouraging more inclusive terms. Tonya does let her mouth run away from her.
This was interesting. Looks like Tonya is going to get some unwanted attention soon.
Her magic is mixing with heart song.
A normal heart song is something that happens to ponies when they feel somehting.
Tonya used her magic to make people sing her song with no emotions behind it.
She is more dangerous than most night ponies because while night ponies can learn mind control they have no teacher right now and their dream powers only work when they are asleep.
I'm pleased that Wild Growth is starting to get some idea how her magic talent works. She might have learned much earlier that she could probably use any strong emotion to focus or empower her magic, since Tempest told Phobia that Wild could do that back in the last book. But perhaps Phobia just forget to share that information with Wild Growth?
It would be interesting if the super apple tree grown in this chapter had magical fruit, perhaps like the Zap Apples Applejack grows. The idea of "magic apples" might remind a Christian like Sunset Blessing of the apples supposedly grown in the Garden of Eden. Wild has now seen there is a connection between music and magic. If she explores it further, we may start seeing some "spontaneous choreography" like that found among the ponies of Equestria. And while we are on the subject of music, Tonya used "Night Pony" magic to get the crowd singing in harmony. Does that suggest the many examples on the show of Ponies spontaneously singing and dancing together might also be due to the unconscious use of the same sort of magic?
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I would think Phobia might be quite angry if another Warden chose to intervene in a matter that so closely affects her waking life without first consulting her.
I don't think so. It has to do with using mind control and I think even the wardens had to give someone the oath. So they will follow through with it.
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I agree as well, and it will not end well if something terrible happens to tonya. Honestly they should just let Luna deal with this.
Great, we get to watch a young, impressionable goal get indoctrinated into the cult of night ponies... If something isn’t done about the Dreamwardens soon, this will get serious.
On top of everything else, Tonya is being dealt with already through the proper, normal, legal channels, albeit some edge-case ones. She’ll getting assistance. I can’t wait to see the Dreamwardens screw this up...
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I doubt that anything too tragic will happen to Tonya, because if Halira were planning to make this story a tragedy, then the tag 'Tragedy" would presumably be on the story's front page along with "Drama" and "Profanity".
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To be fair to readers. I have altered tags before, but I'm not planning a tragedy here. If there is tragedy to be had it won't be in part 1. I kind of have to have Tonya alive if she appears in Pony in the Mirror in any case. The earliest death (other than Swift Strike) I have theoretically planned is in part 3 and I'm not sure if I will be doing more than part 2 at this point. There may always change in plans, but don't expect any other deaths anytime soon.
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Thanks for clearing that up. I personally don't really like Pony tragedies (real life is depressing enough), so I'm glad you aren't planning to kill off any of your characters anytime soon. Though I will probably be sorry if you don't decide to continue this story past part two, since I am enjoying it a great deal.
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Part 2 is five years later than part 1 in storyline, if part 3 comes it is 15 years later than part 1 in storyline. If I do part 3 it may be a full sequel as it will have a major change in tone.
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Tonya was trying to do a good thing, soninhope they will go easy on her
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I spent my early childhood in Germany from when I was just a few months old till around age six, Federal Republic of Germany anyway. I enjoyed it, and remember visiting Frankenstein Castle and the Steiff factory many times as they were less than an hour's drive from my home in Heidelberg. I also lived in Stuttgart and Pirmasens.