Rarity and Twilight Sparkle prepare for their wedding, but somepony is missing.
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Uhm... what?
Did you win?
Excellent work capturing the mind of Rarity as she moves forward, come what may.
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Sadly, no. I did make the finals though, which was exciting.
This was better than I expected it to be for how short it was! Not many authors really touch on Twilight's and Rarity's shared attention to detail and perfectionism. I thought it was really cute and clever how you weaved it into how they would plan for their wedding! Nicely done!
I'm not sure how to read this other than that Rarity expects Rainbow Dash to ruin everything because that's what she always does.