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Sonic rainbow


Love my little pony and love to write

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Summer Bliss was 10 years old when her best friend and only sister came into the world, a filly named Rainbow Dash. When her mother Sunset Shadow dies when Rainbow is still young, and her father that left the family before Rainbow Dash was born, Summer takes it upon herself to be the one to raise Rainbow Dash in to the best she can be.

It certainly is not easy, but one day a huge sacrifice changes their lives forever.

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Comments ( 3 )

My only suggestion to you is to reread this and fix the minor grammar errors. Luckily, most of your errors are comma related, so you won’t have TOO much to fix :raritywink:

Story wise, I think this story has potential. Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for the suggestion I will keep that in mind

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