After her feelings of jealousy for her sister boil over Princess Luna becomes Nightmare Moon and seeks to overthrow Celestia, only to be banished by the element of harmony. However the elements did not send her to the moon like they should have, instead she was sent to a far off planet known as Cybertron where she encounters it's rulers, the mighty Megatron and his Decepticon army. Now the two of them are plotting together and awaiting the day when the banishment is over and the portal to Equestria reopens.
Cover art, which also is what gave me the idea, belongs to IronRaptor. Check them out on DeviantArt
Chapters (2)
Seems pretty interesting here.
I do wonder if Celestia will realize that Luna is definitely not going to find peace with the whole banishment thing.
In fact it will make things worse especially with how Equestria practically forgotten about Luna for a 1000 years, a freaking celebration held on the day of her banishment celebrating DAY over night for a 1000 years, adding so much salt to the wound.
Yeah.. Celestia sure have realize all of that by the time NMM/Luna comes back.
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Indeed it is, sadly hardly anyone took notice and I ended up shelving it (which I know I shouldn't have done since I should write for me and not anyone else, but because of that I wrote a bunch of other stories I enjoyed writing so I suppose it's a wash on in the end)
To that end, I think I might try getting back into writing this though it was fun working on it after all and I still have the broad strokes plan for the story kicking around, thanks for making me think about it again
And thanks for this little binge of yours commenting and favoriting a lot of my stories. Seeing things like that always makes me happy as while, like I said I try and write for me and not others, it still brightens my day to see others enjoy my work
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Ok then.
What do you think on my comment with the Ocellus story there?
Haven't looked at your reply on the Bakugan one btw. Nervousness kicked in there pretty much..
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I read the comment, and I agree that Chrysalis deserved a better ending but at the same time it is what it is and... contrary to what my story suggests I do like the idea of Chrysalis never reforming. Plain and simple reforming everyone wouldn't make sense even in a show as sweet as this, and Chrysalis was such a fun villain that I'd want to keep her a villian... and while I didn't mind the finale too much as it made Chrysalis, Cozy Glow, and Tirek legitimately threatening for a while, a different ending focusing on each of them as individuals would have been appreciated, and hopefully we get that in the season 10 comics
Also sorry if I made you nervous, I just got over excited to see someone so into my story I suppose
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I feel like the whole "not everyone can reform" thing was already fulfilled with what happened to Sombra, Storm King, Shadows, etc.
Having Chrysalis reformed wouldn't kill the whole "not everyone can reform" bit.
Got even more iffy with how some questionable reformations happened like with Garble and Ahuzoltol-something(can't spell the name).
It felt more like Chrysalis got screwed. Heck, they could have her reforming be like she's not all good-y but just snarky but still watching out for her buggos.
Yeah.. my nervousness kicks in when I worry about someone's reply on something important or something going on in a story.
It often makes me procrastinate(is that the right word? Like delaying and such) alot.
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That's understandable on both points
Yeah, a reform of Chrysalis would have been better then some of the other reforms we did get (especially since at the end of the day she was doing what she's doing for the hive) and yeah, a snarky anti hero would have been a great direction to take her character but..... the finale was over a year ago so at this point any complaint I had over it have kind of melted away to me thinking the show itself was over all good (not saying the flaws aren't still there, but I feel like the good the series gave us overall outweighs the flaws, and aside from writing fanfics like that one that explore other routes the show maybe should have taken, I'm content with it as is)
Honestly I do the same thing, especially when I ask spoiler heavy questions and get a reply, I'm suddenly like "Oh god why did I ask that? I don't want to know so early!" and... yeah can totally understand,
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Sadly its not like a flip of a switch for me in terms of "moving on" really..
It really just bugs me in my heart on how things went for the finale.
With how things went for Luna there too, it just left a.. bitterness within me. Bad enough the writers made her retire.
As for my nervousness, its more like I am worried on if I got on a author's nerves or they snap at me(like telling me to "deal with it") or just say something that I was really worried about.
Pretty much due to bad experiences from years ago, I feel nervousness on certain things there pretty much.
Or someone's reply in general depending on the scenario/subject too
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I feel ya, but at the end of the day we all have our own opinions and there's nothing wrong with that
And I'm sorry to hear you've had some experiences on here, but you don't need to worry about that from me, it takes a lot to get on my nerves and someone politely asking a handful of questions about my story certainly wouldn't do it
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I do still enjoy the show though I do want to glare with bitterness whenever I see the "issues" there.
Like how Spike got left out/shafted alot(and the whole dog issue in EQG), the Royal Sisters handled poorly, the retirement crap for Luna and how the ending handled her there..
The nervousness also happens when I say something on how I feel or something as well.
Like on something on a fic and such.
Does my nervousness count as anxiety or something? I don't know if it does or not, but its just like I get their weird feeling in my chest at times and/or I just kept delaying myself from seeing a certain reply or a certain chapter or something.
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(that's part of the reason why I like the show so much and more specifically why Fluttershy is one of my favorite characters as her journey to become more confident is so real as it doesn't happen overnight, she doesn't get confident after one good thing, it takes years of work and help from her friends and even then she's still not the most outgoing pony and that is one of the most accurate depictions of it I've seen, especially in a "kids" show)
Trust me my friend, you are preaching to the quire when it comes to nervousness and anxiety as I unfortunately struggle with that daily, and my only piece of advice on that front is take joy in the small victories. You posted your opinion on my story knowing that I might not fully agree with you, and where prepared to discuss it and that's great
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Thanks.
What other shows do you watch by the way?(Did I asked this already? My memory is iffy/fuzzy at times at certain stuff it seems)
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No problem,
And, I don't think you have and... there's too many to name so I'll just name a few big ones. Inuyasha (absolute favorite anime) Glitch Techs, I'm currently watching the sub of Yu-Gi-Oh GX for the first time right now and it is UNBELIEVABLE better then the dub, and Invader Zim
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I remember the experience of seeing the Japanese version of a YGO series years ago.
I was pretty much going "Say what now??"
I remember watching all of the YGO series and some of Sevens so far.
Also watched Kamen Rider as well. Such as Ex-Aid, Zero-One, Saber and Ryuki(via Dragon Knight many years ago on TV)
Oh Bitch PLEASE!!! You are but a mere Angry and Jealous CHILD as a "Villain"!!!! Compared to the Several Million Years Old Warlord/Number One Gladiator and True Leader of the Decepticons! You would SHIT your self on how many terrifying War Crimes and Atrocities Megatron and his Decepticons did to Poor Cybertron, the Autobots, and the Entire Galaxy/Universe.
The Decepticons are WAY OUT of your "League" of Villainy!
Finally managed to read this new chapter
Like I mentioned in a previous comment, Nightmare Moon is definitely not going to be happy when she finds out Equestria essentially forgotten about her for a 1000 years and how Celestia allowed a celebration go on that essentially added salt to Luna's wounds there.
If only the show properly addressed those issues instead of just going "Hit Luna with a rainbow, have her accept she's in Celestia's shadow for good" or something.