The Mushroom Kingdom never takes a break when it comes to the invasion of Bowser and his minions. However, things take a different turn this time when Princess Peach gets kidnapped and taken away by a new evil force to a place called Equestria.
Now, Mario and Luigi must team up with Bowser to collect certain valuable items for the mysterious figure in exchange for Princess Peach. Little did they know that they’re not the ones looking for these Equestrian items...
NOTE: This story takes place before Season 8. I do not own Paper Mario or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. All rights reserved go to Nintendo and Hasbro.
Speaking as a fellow writer working on a Paper Mario story: I really like the start of this one. Can't wait to see more chapters.
I was just looking for paper mario stories the other day! xD
Peach is an impatient one
My best guess is it is Sombra
Apparently Peach forgot her weekly kidnapping… ups
Yes! I knew it! What is my price?
Well, that defiantly seems interesting. Let’s see where this might go
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Reeeeally? Give mine a read while you're waiting for this one to update, why don't you?
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Will do lol
Not sure what Sombra wants to do here, but the story already feels a bit better than others I had seen. Not sure if I just disliked the crowded chapters with the main six and the partners, or if it really was not that interessting to me.
I hope I can stay till the end this time.
Not sure what to think about that.
nnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooo
While the game was nice, I disliked the transformation with his mustache on them and to be honest I find that cappy as interessting as bucky the bucket, handy the glove or whatever weird helper he got recently.
It still is better, but I wil have to see what comes next.
I don't know if I like this...
Should I tell the Griffons, Hippogriffs, Dragons, Changelings, Donkeys, and Yaks that they don't exist?
No, just no. I don't like this... at all.
... Interesting? Ok, that solves the fact that Paper Mario is its own continuity and so on, but still wired.
I'm sure the Equestrians would appreciate that
Then it is not a time machine, but a teleporter
Hrm...Something seems off to me here. I totally buy that there would be paper versions of other characters like Professor E. Gadd and Cappy, But, I don't think I buy that the Cappy in this story is the same one from Odyssey. Seems like he would have been better off as a full on paper counterpart, as opposed to the same character.
In addition: why take the time machine to Equestria? I feel like an expert on other worlds like Professor E. Gadd would have created some kind of portal, or modified a green pipe to reach that other land.
I'm sure that this will all make sense at some point in the story, so don't take my questions to heart. Just keep doing what you're doing, if you already have a plan to address these at a later chapter.
Awesome
Awesome!
No spike yet...
Well that was funny for some reason, It felt like it finally mentioned how they can go overboard with this stuff sometimes.
I kind of wished for Paper Mario VS Rainbow Dash as another intro fight with Paper Mario winning.
That seems strange here, their reaction is just a bit to much even if Mario would probably bow to a princess if I like it or not.
Yes it is Mario, don't worry.
I somehow always imaged if that would be a game, then he would have a chance against Unicorns or even the Alicorns, at least after he powered up a bit. I'm not exactly one for making up the biggest theories, but I never imaged him being stopped that simple.
HHhhhmmm not sure if I want him to become a pure magician or if I want him to add a bit "Paper Mario" to the attacks.
The chapter was still nice enough, I think at this point the other story gave me the first wrong signals.
Oh no, a friendly race of potential allies… I fail to see the problem. If he had said, ponies could accidently stumble in, ok, but this sounds surprisingly racist
Burn first, ask questions later
They are spying on the animals
What let you think otherwise?
of course, but I won't be saying anything right now. I just kepp counting how often they probably rescue them instead of Mario and Co doing something awesome.
Sorry but I maybe have some kind of prejudices about such stories even if I liked it so far.
Okay now after Rainbow uuhhhh Twilight won, I need to see the rest.
I maybe forgot it, but are they in the paper world too? I mean is this a paper pony world?, because they strangely are so competetive and know about combos and stuff as if they would always do it.
I will have to see where this is going.
Strange. I didn't think Mario would feel the need to behave so formally in front of royalty. I always figured him for the casual, blue-collar type. Then again, Mario's entire personality is up to interpretation, so I won't give you any trouble for that at all.
I like the idea of Tirek being involved. I liked him as a villain, but instead they pick Queen Chrysalis as the recurring bad guy for the show.
On a final note: where's Spike in all this? I know most people don't like him as a character, but I really feel like he's an important asset to the show's tone and balance.
Aww. Cappy's got a crush on Applejack. Also, love that surprise pop in from Luigi at the end.
What mustache?
Of course she likes the hat
Awesome!
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He’ll be in here shortly. He’s still busy sucking in all his “glory
aaaawwwwww he is not Chryssis friend.
I really don't like the map room, some reasons are because of the possible cliches it stands for, that it makes me think of several of those bad rescure heroes cartoons from when I was a kid and I never understood why Twilight wasn't just going with them when she wanted it in the beginning.
I'm not the only one who thought like that, but I'm not sure if I had that disscussion here or on youtube under the episode, probably here.
So, we figured out Sombras danger level: Idiot
Why do I think these are not the real deal?
That... is a lot. 15 Items, well if you don't count the pillars as living beings
Awesome!
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There's a reason for this and it's all explained in Mario and Luigi: Paper Jam.
You see it's explained in Paper Jam that Paper Mario's world exists inside a magic self writing book inside the 'canon' platforming world. Kinda like how in kingdom hearts Hundred Acre Woods exists in a book but is it's own world. They both exist and can influence each other.
Sombra! I knew that you would show up somehow.
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Yeah, yeah, I know that. Still, find it wired that Capy decided to simply jump into the book.
... I... I don't even
Awesome!
I like where this story is going.
Except when Peach is being forced to be a bride of someone. I'm willing to think Mario and Bowser are not going to like it.
But the story is going great.
Ah, yes he is very polite until he isn’t
Oh boy, evil Trixi, that is going to be fun
You don’t say
In you sharp claw hands
Baah
I think you forgot a word here
Awesome!
Ok, that was cute
That would be one of the few times this actually worked
Ok, that got a chuckle out of me
What is it? Oh, only over 9... kinda disappointing
What?
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Which of the three choices at the end did you pick?
Awesome!
That is not an answer
Depends if you count taking everything that is in a block as stealing
Awesome!
Ha, cute
Not really, the Tree of Harmony and with that, the elements were not a thing until after their disappearance
... What? As far as we know she has no parents, we never saw them and it would screw with the characterization of Toadsworth.
Wow
Would you believe it if you sent him to another world?
That sounds so wrong.
Hey, that cockroach came back
Awesome!
Awesome!
Wait.. what did she say?
!!! N..no.. Did she just.
...... I WANT THIS ITEM NOW!!!!!
NO! Do not touch Tempest Sombra! I will hurt you!!
.... What... What... WHAT!!!!
I will murder them!
Giga Bowser! Now the Tail brothers will get a Ultra Beatdown! This is a good story!
NO!
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Sorry, I had to.