This story will be about a War shaking Equestria at its roots, The Changlings are on the rise, and Luna, claiming her sisters rule was unjust, demanded retribution! Celestia obviously did not agree to this, and told her sister to be still or face banishment. Luna ran away and began the Rebel movement "New Lunar Republic" or NLR, claiming that they are the Tide of real peace, and will bring it with force if need be. Stuck in the mixst of all this, our 6 main ponies find themselves On different sides and with different views as who they all support. What will happen if they face each other? none of them know... But there all sure they'll find out soon enough. and who started all this? and what is the point?
Chapters (2)
Why is it always the NLR? I'd think because of Luna's recent return she'd establish an Oligarchy to help her rule because she doesn't know the geo-political situation of Equestria and it's neighbors. Sorry about that, just pre-review rambling.
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SWEET CELESTIA AT A TITTYBAR THAT'S A MONSTER OF A WALL OF TEXT! Also, it's broadsword not boardsword. How the hell did you get those two confused? All in all, it's a pretty stale and standard "Equestria goes to war" fanfiction. Though I did think that little touch at the end with Pinkie was nice, kind of like what happened with Fluttershy in Equestria: Total War by the guy who frikkin invented the Equestrian War archetype in fanfiction. So yeah, this might cause some to whiten their pants with their vaginal juices (I'm talking about the fanboys), I'm a bit skeptical. Overall, this doesn't really get a sort of grade. I guess it's one of those types of fanfiction that really might get better later.
Though, again, I doubt it.
And that my friends, is pure evil (the voice)
you get 5 spike for this excellent intro, although i would like if Rainbow would be on luna's side (along with Fluttershy and Twilight)
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I dont know with twilight since she is celestias student.... But I feel the same about rainbow Dash she should be on lunas side
998933 I would cry if Rainbowdash had to kill Fluttershy, if this happens, i will hunt him down and kill him...
and maybe twilight starts feeling like she's Celestia's bitch
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And who know what might happen to rainbow dash, whos to say she even lives past this chapter 
Well im sorry you feel that way, i havent read any of the other war fics, but im sure there are alot of them. i hope to make this one a better one for you
998694 thank you
998944 Heheheheh, just try and find me
999014 i will, don't tempt me
998944 i allways had this idea/thought that rarity,rainbow and applejack being with the NLR and the rest being with the solar Empire.
999071 it isn't important to me, as long as Rainbowdash and Fluttershy are on the same team!
Well, before reading, I'vebeen working a EGW fic of my own.
Obviously: Twi, AJ, and Dash are Celstia (Twi's Celly's student, AJ needs the sun for apples, and Dash is loyal to her)
And Pinkie, Rarity and Shy are Luna. (More parties at night, and more high society events to. And Luna is usually the more peaceful)
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well, that might be obvious to you, but there are more then just those simple reasons on would be with another,
and this isnt only the solar empire and NLR. theres also the threat of changlings.. and another threat.
dont judge books by there covers
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My only response to that is what do the changelings stand to gain for attacking now?
If the land is torn apart with war, love is less plentiful. So, I have the changelings staying out of it.
And I'm not judging, so don't throw a fit. I'm voicing my opinion.
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woah there cowboy, i didnt mean to sound pissed, i was simply trying to pose that question in the hopes you'd be more interested.
sorry if i seemed mad.
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No, no, my fault. I'm far to used to people throwing a major fit when someone voices there opinion.
My apologies.
I like it, keep it going!
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Thank you, its people like you, that keep people like me going
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I'm here to please!
This story must go on! it feels like this is going to be a great story and finally something that looks a good NLR vs SE story
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Comments like this make my heart beat faster in joy. 
thank you sooo much, ill try my hardest to fulfill your hopes 
So huh... When can we expect an update? Just asking out of pure interest
1128184 I'm sorry, i've been working a ton on homework, I'm a senior. I'll Post more, It just seemed like no one was interested.
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Well i'm very interested in your story... For my piont of view it looks like this story some potential
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Your the best. Your getting me back into it
Always looking for someone to spell check for me, and help me clean it up a bit. Offering up ideas as to where you want the story to head or where you think its heading is appreciated to :3
very short but still good cant wait for more
Little sections at a time I'm afraid, I'm balancing school work with story work.
It'll get better, i'll try to make a post every week. But i'm sure that'll change soon enough.
I really like this story.
I just can't believe that scootaloo would do that, and same with pinkie...
It seems Rarity, Fluttershy, Apple Jack, and Rainbow dash are still sane.