• Member Since 25th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen February 8th

Lily Lain


When all you have is a hammer, everything else is a nail.

Comments ( 8 )

Wow. I mean that's all I can really say I normally don't like short stories (unless there clopfics) but that was really good the way you wrote it made me feel like I was there in every scene 10/10:twilightsmile:

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So upvote that story dawg!

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Can't won't let me
Think it's turned off...if you can even do that

Yeah, that was pretty good. Nice pacing and decent imagery. Keep writing, I'd actually love to read a remastered version of this as your skills develop!

We need more stories like this.

Well, now we know what would happen if Celestia were to become Daybreaker out of grief rather than hedonism...*shiver*

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