• Published 26th Jun 2018
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A Princess's Secret - StormLuna



Twilight has just been crowned as a princess but is unsure of what her role will be. On top of that, she is hiding a secret that she is scared to admit to anypony, even the one that it would affect the most.

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Sharing the Good News

After what turned out to be a truly wonderful night, Twilight and Fluttershy were woke up by the morning sun. When they woke up, they gave one another a smile and a tender kiss before getting out of bed. Once they were out of bed the very first thing that crossed their minds was breakfast, "Twilight, what do you say we go out and celebrate our new relationship and share the good news with our friends?"

Twilight looked around and noticed that the only thing she had to wear was her gown from yesterday's coronation and did not want to wear that. She replied, "That sounds great Fluttershy but what am I going to wear?"

Fluttershy motioned for Twilight to join her over at her dresser and suggested, "How about you find something you think you can fit into."

Twilight began to dig through her dresser and like it was with the night clothes, Twilight was unsure as to whether she would be able to fit into her clothes. It wasn't until she got to the bottom drawer of the dresser where she found Fluttershy's dresses, things that she would be more likely to be able to fit into. She held one out and said, "I think I should be able to fit into this."

Fluttershy replied, "Alright." At first she had planned on wearing what she wears more often than not, pants and a loose fitting shirt but since Twilight was going to be wearing one of her dresses she decided that she would do the same. She found one that was fairly similar to the one Twilight grabbed and asked, "How does this look?"

Twilight gave her a smile, "I think it looks great." She looked at the one she was going to wear and the one Fluttershy grabbed and giggled, "You really want to send the message that we're an item don't you?"

Fluttershy giggled in return, "Of course I do, I think everypony should know!"

Twilight couldn't help but giggle as Fluttershy grabbed her hand and they headed out the door. Most everypony knew that Twilight's coronation took place on the prior day and they couldn't help but stare. What caused them to stare further though was that the two were walking arm in arm, hand in hand and giving one another smiles.

When they got to Sugarcube Corner, all of their friends were present and were surprised to see them holding one another close. Rarity was the first to say anything, "Twilight, Fluttershy darlings, are you?"

Fluttershy replied, "Yes Rarity, we're a couple now!"

Twilight added, "Last night, Fluttershy and I talked and I revealed what was really bothering me and things just took off after that."

Applejack asked, "Wait a minute, was what was bothering you yesterday on the way home a crush on Fluttershy?"

Pinkie added, "You know you could have brought that up to us, we wouldn't have minded!"

Twilight replied, "I know that girls but this was something that I wanted to share with Fluttershy and Fluttershy alone." Her face turned red as she continued, "And once we became a couple, we held each other close and listened to the storm."

Fluttershy too turned red, "And holding Twilight close was so wonderful."

The four gave one another smiles and then turned to them. Rainbow asked, "So what is next for you now?"

Applejack added, "Yeah and do you think Princess Celestia will approve?"

Fluttershy replied, "Well we are a couple and we'll hopefully grow closer like all true marefriends do."

Twilight added, "And as far as Celestia approving goes, I honestly don't care if she does or not." All four of them gasped in shock as they knew how Twilight was, they knew that she was always paranoid over perhaps displeasing her mentor. She continued, "If she is upset and decides to take my wings and title away over this, so be it." She pulled Fluttershy closer and finished, "Fluttershy is far more important to me than a royal title or being an Alicorn."

Fluttershy gasped, "Really?"

Twilight gave her a kiss and replied, "Yes, really. I have had a crush on you for so long and now that we are marefriends, that is what is important to me."

The fact that Twilight was putting her ahead of Celestia's approval brought Fluttershy to tears, "Thank you Twilight, you have no idea how happy that makes me!"

The moment between the two brought about huge smiles on their friends' faces. Even Rainbow who tries to act tough and hide emotions like that couldn't help but be happy for them but she was curious, "So when do you plan on telling the princess about this?"

Twilight replied, "I'm not sure yet." She then noticed that there were two empty seats for them at the table and added, "Enough about that for now." She turned to Fluttershy and asked, "What do you say we sit down and get something to eat?"

Fluttershy replied, "That sounds wonderful Twilight!"

For Twilight, everything had finally fallen into place. After years of being Princess Celestia's protege and nearly three years in Ponyville, she had finally fulfilled her destiny of becoming the fourth princess of Celestia. What was more important to her though was that she was finally able to admit her crush to the pony she loved and had her as a marefriend. As she sat there with her friends and her marefriend, she felt like the future was bright and full of possibilities.

For Fluttershy, she finally felt true happiness. She had a crush on Twilight for quite some time but was always too scared to bring it up to her. The one thing that kept running through her mind was the night before, the night that not only did she finally get to kiss the mare she loved so much, but share an erotic moment with her and became her marefriend.

Comments ( 10 )

This is a cute story. This isn't my favorite ship but I was fine with it.

9009819

Thanks, I really enjoyed writing this one.

Awwww, very precious interactions that are always bound to happen with these two and you captured it nicely. Super cuteeee.
Always love seeing new TwiShy fics, always makes me smile and gush, ahhhhh, love it

9014367

Thanks, I do enjoy this ship and interactions between these two in ship fics. I know a lot of people like shipping Shy with Rainbow but I think either Twilight or Rarity make for much better stories.

9014676
Yes FlutterDash is quite popular, though I admit that I find cuteness in the enjoyment in smaller, less known ships such as TwiShy and many others heh. Yess, Rarity or Twi work well with Fluttershy the most, I feel. Once again, love the cuteness in this ahhh, continue making adorable fics of shipping like this

9015251

I like RariShy because of the elegance you can throw in there and I like TwiShy just because I think they're cute together. Not a fan of shipping Dash in general, her and AJ are simply too much of tomboys for me to care to ship....when it comes to the younger ponies, I feel the same way about AB and Scootaloo, too much of tomboys for me to want to ship.

9015609
Oh yes! I don't read as much RariShy as I could but from what I've seen their dynamic is just sooo fitting with the grace that they have and the more informed of society they are, and if not, then they reflect that off of each other and it can be very cute as well! Ahhh and I see what you mean when towards Aj & Dash shippings, I've never put too much thought into those but I personally am ok with them as long as there's no interference with TwiShy heh

9015819

I see what you mean when towards Aj & Dash shippings, I've never put too much thought into those but I personally am ok with them as long as there's no interference with TwiShy heh

I can deal with ships involving them but I certainly wouldn't write any myself. Fluttershy is one of those sweet characters that I think is perfect for romance. I wrote one called "Fluttershy's First Date" where her and Colgate start dating because she couldn't afford her bill and Colgate gave her the option of either pay up or go out to supper with her. Obviously she chose the latter and love bloomed.

Now I'm working on a sequel that takes place six months later where Colgate is head over heels in love with her and plans on asking her "the big question"

9015939
I'll be sure to check that one out!!

Good story. I enjoyed reading it. The only thing is, I think the dialogue is a tad awkward and could use a bit of touch-up. Maybe try saying it aloud just to see if it sounds like something someone would actually say. I'm also a bit confused as to whether this is human or pony Twilight and Fluttershy, because you mention both a horn and hands... Well, I realize I'm criticizing a story from 2018, and you're probably already a better writer, but I still hope this helps a bit.

Personally, I like this ship (at the very least, I like it better than any alternatives). And I think if you look at the show, many events can be interpreted (or perhaps it more apt to say willfully misinterpreted) to support it. For instance, in the first episode, why is Fluttershy introduced after Rarity, whom Spike develops a crush on? And doesn't it seem like Twilight is annoyed by how much attention Fluttershy gives Spike? And most importantly, why are they teamed up so often?! Anyway, glad to see there are some fanfictions for it.

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