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Flint-Lock


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John, Equestria's first and only human, loves going to the beach. As it turns out, so does a certain Siren...


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Ohhhh, this has the potential to be an interesting full story. I'd be on board for that for sure. :eeyup: And Sonata kept me laughing all throughout. :rainbowlaugh: She really is an adorable bag of silly when you get right down to it.

Jeez, I thought The Hunt would've been enough for you, but nope. Guess you just can't get enough of them Sweet Sireny Fluffy Feels

A little rough around the edges—needs a bit of polishing, mechanically—but nice story otherwise.

This is good. More is required! A multi-chapter epic is needed here.:eeyup:

Absolutely adorable. Only gets better with a second run-through.

That was a very fun read. One of the few stories I've read recently that makes me want to read it again. As far as continuations go, I think it's fine the way it is. It leaves plenty to the reader's imagination.

Thank you for this. :twilightsmile:

well wasant this sweet

so like are the kids mermaids or do they have legs with fishy bits on them

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What I can say is the best part is the interactions between your guy and Sonata. That was a lot of fun to read.

Only Sonata can make a hate-eating monster look and act adorable.

Great job! I love cute, heartwarming stories like this. Keep up the good work.

Wives. As he’d learned when he first proposed to Sonata, Siren marriages were a “package deal”: marry one Siren, you get her siblings absolutely free. It had been tricky at first, especially with Adagio and her...difficult personality, but they’d managed to make it work.

:rainbowlaugh:

this was super cute and adorable

You forgot the "Romance" Tag.

Didn’t expect it to go there, but that made it even more enjoyable!

Shame it wasn’t ground beef, but in a nation where most of the livestock talked back, red meat was kind of hard to come by.

He should visit one of those 'Darkquestrias' where the griffons basically run an 'Animal Farm'. :fluttershbad:

Apparently Equestria also gives the middle finger to the basics of genetics.

The odds of even two unrelated creatures from a single world being compatible are beyond calculation... we're talking about another universe. With creatures that don't even function the same way.

Wish-fulfillment this severe is just silly.

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Equestria gives the middle finger to a lot of things. genetics, physics, evolution, biology, physics again, but logic most of all. Oh, and also physics.

9004808 So clearly we need to cross a human with the chimera next! And then the hydra! And then Discord!

Could a human cross with a Timberwolf? ... LET'S FIND OUT!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!! :pinkiecrazy:

(You fool, you got his mad scientist juices flowing! YOU'VE DOOMED US ALL!!) :fluttershbad:

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Yes! Absolutely. also, mad scientist juices are the best things with which to make food for thoughts. logical or otherwise.

Can you please make a sequel or two to this at some point? Ones that take place after the events of the first time John & Sonata met?

I really love this story, and I would love to see more development between the two.

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It's a My Little Pony fanfic. What did you expect?

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I might add a few more chapters to this one.

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Also, aren't you in the least bit...disturbed that our hero married three sea monsters?

I claim this fic sequel bait,(sequel bait / a story so good you want a sequel or prequel)

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Well...maybe just a little.

Why do you ask?

Liked the story alot and i saw that you might be adding more chapters to this and i hope you do i would love to read more about this couple.

This was adorable, and I'd super read another one. First date! :p

Comment posted by Nocturne Hurakan deleted Jun 25th, 2018

9005391 Pure Vulcan-like logic and rationality, obviously!

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I agree with you my friend. This is a cute and silly story.

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:facehoof: Crape Suzette man. I totally forgot to tell you about this one. What are going to do?

Good thing I am a sucker for cute too.

Mmmm. Fish Waifus

Okay, there a story about the fish waifu. Will we ever get it.

Sequel please!!!

Even better, he’d had a brush with death, and survived. He almost wished for a manticore to show up and attack, just so he could fight it with his bare hands!

With a mentality like that, he could be the next Saxton Hale.

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MLP Herd Mentality
It's common in fimfiction to do multiple marefriends or wives.
Check out these for example:
Mentality: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390576/it-takes-a-village (incomplete)
Dating: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/145815/gateway-of-the-eyes-first-draft
Marriage: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370749/foster-father-for-the-princesses (incomplete)

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Herd/Herem Mentality
Common in fimfiction the have more than one marefriend or wife.
Look at these for example:
Mentality: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390576/it-takes-a-village (Incomplete)
Dating: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/145815/gateway-of-the-eyes-first-draft
Marriage: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370749/foster-father-for-the-princesses (Incomplete)

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Well... Look at the gryphons. Something with claws and beak should've screwed something with paws , claws and tail.
Equestria gives middle finger to many things, as was noted here earlier in the comments. Chimeras must be favourites of discord to behold. So many "monstrous" things with a lot of possible combinations.
So it's not so far fetched.... It's just the size difference that is unusual. In the end - "love conquers all" is here to stay.

Cute! Didn't see that ending coming, mind.

This is cute, really really cute.

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I need to talk with you. If our friendship meant anything at all to you please talk with me on ps4. I really want to get to the bottom of this because I do not know what I did to make you upset.

Please edit this story at some point.

You write such interesting oneshot fics that would make such great series!

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