This story takes place after the events of the My little pony movie (warning: spoilers for the movie is ahead!)
Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have been busy defending Equestria and dealing with their own issues for so long. After the Storm king destroyed the palace and it's being repaired the two decided for five days they want to explore the ocean as sea ponies. They'll spend the time relaxing and enjoying each others company while exploring a new world without having to worry about anything.
But during their getaway, the two princesses are swept out to sea by a un-natural storm. Now the two are lost in the vast ocean filled with strange creatures and new races! The two princesses will have to work together to get back to Equestria, or be fated to be stuck wondering the oceans as sea ponies forever!
I'll probably have to read and find out, but are there races of sea creatures you have created yourself? 😄
9001947
Well I took things from various other ideas from other stories. and Greek mythology as well
9001953
Like Sirens? ^^ Cause that's pretty cool. 😄
are the designs for Sealestia and Sea-luna official or fan-made, also no romance subplot between Novo and Celestia? mighty disappointed in you.
If the two princesses ruled the sea Equestria, how should the Hippogriff live?😋Do you want to starve them?
9002754
No these desings are fan made. Also I dont think Novo and Celestia are going to be shipped.
9002756
Their not going to rule sea equestria. Its just a vacation
I lov3 this concept.
Can definitely see this in canon.
9002937
well the movie made it pretty obvious they had a thing for each other
Very nice! This story is certainly a fun variation from your adorable works. It shows your true versatility as a writer and how, truly, you are not one to be "Type-Casted".
The imagery of the castle in repair was really nice. I also liked how Twilight, as would be expected, would be all about taking over so her mentor and Luna could have a break. You definitely have set up for a fun story. Here's to some underwater fun and adventure ahead!
Love it. Please continue
in almost two hundred years she’s kind of on a break
Celestia sighed, and gave a slight nod realizing that Luna was thinking the same thing on how they felt so useless.
1000 years and we still don't know how to swim. Love it.
Beautiful visuals throughout this chapter. You certainly bring Seaquestria to life.
Very clever in using coral for tables and bed frames along with sponges for beds and chairs. I loved those details. Very cool.
The volleyball game was extra fun, too. The scene was fun to imagine with each character's personality. I'm sure Sky Star would totally get into it, too. She's like the Pinkie Pie under the sea.
Whoa! This was all a wonderful surprise to discover! Very unexpected in all the right ways. Jovial but still serious. Truly, with some small exceptions, something I could see as a genuine episode.
Celestia becoming the boat was a real surprise. Now the question is if it was the ethereal metal attached to her that caused the pearl's power to meld her with the ship? Or perhaps one must possess a certain wisdom in order to not let the pearl work on a whim?
Luna becoming an octopus to save the day was awesome! I'm sure the fun was octupled during this triumph.
Hmm. So the captain knows Soleno… Definitely leaves a lot of room for possibilities ahead.
The pirate back story is really interesting, too. Another nice surprise. :)
*Standing Ovation* Beautiful! simply astounding work!
I wasn't even expecting a visit from Neptune when we last left off. Now he is not only here but also a former Alicorn who has a crush on Princess Luna! Wow-wow-wow!
Extra points for the delightful 'Little Mermaid' references. I totally liked the captain being turned into Flounder. :)
Your descriptions of the undersea world is breathtaking. That scene between Luna and Neptune was also very well-crafted. Bravo!
The same two paragraphs were repeated. Definitely should fix this.
But other than that, pretty interesting thus far.
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thanks for pointing that out
Also a great addition to a most fun-filled story! Lots happened but, in my opinion, at a pace comparable to an episode of MLP. Nothing dragged on and the right amount of activity between each portion was spot on. Definitely easy to imagine what was going on.
What I like is how it has a feel like a younger reader may have in developing their own story. It's hard as a writer to make tales that best fit that early stage of creativity. However this story has done well in keeping it very fun without worrying too much about anything except having fun in telling a story. It certainly brings me back to how fun it was to be creative without thinking I had to have everything make perfect sense, etc. It's nice to read something so free and fun while easily imaginable.
<LoL!> Still loving Pirate Captain Flounder. Great visuals there, too.
Nice job!
Is this also an age-regression fic?
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i can't read your comment?
9372741
no sorry
I don't get it. What did Twilight not do? this ending is leaving me confused. what sort of things would she not have been capable of doing?
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It was her first time as being princess of Equestria there was alot of duties she may have forgotten or was unable to due to being so busy
I think it's cute, but I thought Captain Celano was a giant parrot, not a griffin.
9719243
im just guessing that her father may have been a gryphon. Honestly this is my head cannon lol.
9719283
Makes sense.