The entire series of FiM as a harem comedy, centering around a Rule 63 Twilight Sparkle
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From a previous blog post:
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My reaction to Silver Spoon asking Snails out
/Autobot/Decepticon/personal “TARDIS”/occasionally, a bounce house.
Laughed so hard.
Now, I have one dream done...
Dusk isn't stupid. He's just.... blissfully unaware.
...Am I sensing the development of an actual plot? This can't be! Though the plot would be rediculos, it would fit this story that's amazing and stuff...
Hey, did you get the idea of writing this story from an anime show? 'Cause most anime shows have like a ton of anime girls who have a crush, or love if you would call it, this 1 simple guy. Which would have lead to some pervy scenes... I loved this! THUMBS UP INSTANTLY!!! Love the picture by the way! It's so anime-ish! I just love that!
Yes. An excellent turn around. Marry her Dusk, think of the great and powerful children you could have.
Trixie's trailer! If I had to pick one, I'd say Decepticon. Perhaps bounce house.
Now that was fucking hilarious! This story just keeps getting better and better. Onward with the shenanigans!
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Couldn't express that better myself.
IT HURTS!!!
And Trixie joins the prospective harem... well... we all knew that was going to happen.
Kind of a bit disturbing the secondary bits with Snails... but ok.
Huh? Trixie is staying? I find this an interesting change in the plot. Also Mustaches FTW!
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Darn it pinkie stop breaking the Forth Wall! We have to fix it you know? It's not cheap!
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I'd totally buy a Trixie nacho cheese dispenser and a copy of The Great and Powerful Trixie: The Video Game!
1181777 This is exactly what i thought was gonna happen when you said that XD
Dusk has game, yet he doesn't even know it.
"dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/Autobot/Decepticon/personal “TARDIS”/occasionally, a bounce house."
I laughed so hard!!
also:
"From finding out what the school paste was made of pegasus brains or not to how to move Sugarcube Corner across the entire town,"
what?
So TGPT is going to live in a broom closet from now on? Dusk knows how to treat his property
Silly Snails, swag can't be turned off
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No you can't.
harem time!
shining is gonna be so jealous
I like to imagine that immediately thereafter, Trixie inquires as to why their only "punishment" is being given a mustache.
Dusk then replies, "Oh, that's not their punishment. This is."
And then he rips the hair off their faces in the most painful manner possible.
1182018 Is he? Shining's girl isn't liable to tear him to pieces at the slightest provocation.
My, I'm eloquent today, aren't I?
Did Applejack just forget about kissing Dusk? I wonder if she is just biding her time....
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LET IT CONTINUE! Applejack and Dusk for best shipping!
(Love your writing BTW, keep it up!)
1182016 Yes I can.
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*Sees update*
*reads*
*refreshes page*
*another update?*
Huzzah! The updates have been doubled!
Keep it up!
1181849 Well, the cover does have an anime-esque look to it. Yeah, you're thinking of is called "Ecchi". Just saying...
Another great chapter
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and so now Trixie is thrown into the mix as well
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You magnificent bastard
Snails has swag?
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the author actually DID get the idea from that particular anime genre, so yeah
i can't wait to see dusk erupt into flames like twilight did......
this was amazing BTW
Awesome!
Adding Trixie to the semi-permanent cast AND having her live with Dusk can only lead to hilarity.
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More grammatical errors in this chapter than there are in the others, but the hilarity definitely keeps the ball rolling. Please continue.
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dressing trailer/unfoldable stage/caravan/living quarters/RV/fortune-telling stand/Autobot/Decepticon/personal “TARDIS”/occasionally, a bounce house.
The most epic thing I have ever heard of....
I have to say a bunch of friends thought i wrote this... it took a lot of convincing to prove i didnt. Being Dusk himself though I agree AppleShine is best ship Trixie living with me though that can only mean hellatious amounts of crazy in the future keep it up and i fully love this fic.
oh lord, they're roommates.
A few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there, but still one of the most entertaining things I've ever read. "Good show" mate!
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Oh goodness gracious, the potential for future antics has me giddy with excitement. :D
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'Pinkie's fourth wall awareness is well written AND humorous , sadly a rare occurrence these days.'
Are you sure it's rare? Because I swear it nearly every fic I've read with Pinkie in it the author almost seems to go out of their way to have to break the 4th wall(or at least lean on it/be aware of it), sometimes to the point of becoming annoying(at least to me)-like addressing the audience or knowing she's being watched/is a cartoon(i.e mentioning things like episodes, cutscenes, fading to black and stuff like that' which she does not do in the show.
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XD, Well, actually Pinkamena would probably kill any and all mares who become Dusk's marefriend so she can make Pinkie happy, even though Pinkie would probably be all, " WHY DID YOU KILL ALL MY FRIIIIEEENNDS!!?? BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
Awesome, this is actually improving. In terms of story. The style and flow could use a little more work, though. At least the jokes are funny.
Horray for reverse psychology.
This is how the episode should have ended. With Trixie on her knees begging to be taught by Twilight. As for it happening to Dusk this is even better and far more entertaining.
That is without a doubt the most amazing cart ever.
Oh gosh I just love your writing style. We need a moustached narwhal.