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This story is a sequel to Luna's Foal
Luna’s filly was taking more of her mother’s time and Celestia’s reluctance to accept the father was driving a wedge between the Royal sisters.
When Equestria finds itself under attack the sisters must act, but can they pull together or will bitterness divide them?
This story can be continued further to Celestia's Alliance.
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A filly is a female foal, if the foal's sex is male, then he would be a colt.
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Ooopsie!
I must have got carried away with the spellchecker! I've put it right now - thanks for the spot!
9010731
No problem!
Good Celestia needs to be punish for being such a bitch.
When the heck did Daybreaker come out?! We've only ever seen her in one episode and that was in Starlight's dream! Am I missing something?
Are we ever going to see Celestia and Luna make up? I hate seeing them divided like this! Whether can be a chance for Celestia to see that Sombra truly loves Luna and isn't out to get the throne. I can't blame Tia for being cautious, but it's ruining her relationship with her little sister!
poor tia. she's now alone in her castle.
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No, you’re not missing anything!
“A Royal Problem”, which was my favourite episode from season 7, showed how Daybreaker lurks below Celly’s calm and self-disciplined surface. I imagine her as a pitiless voice in Celly’s head, antagonising her when she is at her lowest and aching for a chance to break out into the real world and wreak havoc like Nightmare Moon did. What I wanted to show was Celly’s internal struggle at the point when she feels that the world is turning against her; to regain control over her alter ego in contrast to the way that Luna was unable to do when she turned into Nightmare Moon.
There is a chance that the two sisters may make up, but as this story finishes, Luna is with Sombra and Penumbra while Celly is bored out of her wits handling Court business on her own and wishing things with her sister had worked out better. Poor Celly really isn’t having a good time of it at all!
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You're right - it's really not working out too well for her
Maybe Princess Twilight will stop by and cheer her up a little more often?
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hope so.
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Again. She went from having nobody there with her for a long time, to having Cadence, then Twilight, and then Luna back again. Then Cadence moved to the Empire, Twilight to Ponyville, and Luna to the Everfree, all in short order. This could end similarly to the Nightmare Moon incident, with Daybreaker taking control by seizing on Celestia's loneliness. It'd be interesting to see Luna's reaction, realizing that she drove Celestia to that point.
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Thanks! You're right - I've tried to draw upon Celly's reactions in challenging personal circumstances, such as to NMM and Daybreaker and play them out in a situation where Luna not only has a romance with but also has a foal by her enemy and then leaves the Royal Castle in Canterlot to live with him. I have put her in a very difficult if not completely unfair situation where she is on the defensive, but there are different paths to reconciliation (which may or may not include Sombra taking over Equestria) ...
9020036
That makes sense.
You should continue it! I just love it and would love to see more of your amazing stories!
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Thank you for your kind words!
Another installment will be coming out shortly - I hope you will like that too.
Thank you for your kind support and I hope to see you again soon!
I just love it!
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Happy to hear you're still following the series!
It's looking pretty grim for both of the Royal sisters - best read the last two episodes and see how it turns out ...
Thanks for your support!
I'll of course still follow the series!And yeah,I feel sorry for both of the Royal Sisters.I guess it's very tough for them and Princess Luna can't entirely do her job as the Night Princess and she needs to look after Penny and Princess Celestia has to still support her sister even if the stallion she loved isn't that trustful(in Princess Celestia's opinion) and may just said he loved her sister to get the crown.
Oh well.I'll read the last two episodes then.
I know I sound gloomy for some reason so...
THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!I'M SOOOOO TRACKING THIS!
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
I hope the rest of the series lives up to your expectations!
Hehe,they probably will.You are such a good writer and you have a wonderful way with words.
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I hope you still feel the same way once you've finished!
Just for you, here are the links to the last two episodes - enjoy:
[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/414131/celestias-alliance]
[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415171/catharsis]
Thank you ever so much!
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Thank you, I'm so pleased you're enjoying this five-part series!
Has Sombra reformed or is it all a devious plan? Read on and find out!
Thanks for your support and your kind words.
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