You're stuck in a new world where nothing seems real to you. Forgetting you're whole life from before doesn't make things better not to mention the head injury you have.
Trying to live through all of this won't be easy, nor will understanding half of it. Maybe things will be better than the life you lived that you can't remember. Just don't think too hard, you may regret it.
Life will be different, life will return, life will go on but how is the question.
A very compelling start you have here, TrueSoul.
990651 Thank you. For a first time writer, that means a lot.
this is very good
tracked
you may continue
Actually pretty good. Pacing just bothers me a bit. But otherwise good story for a first time writer True.
Enjoy this: i.imgur.com/nuR4V.gif
996040
Seconded.
not bad not bad at all. Ok screw it that was a perfect start please keep it up.
Love it! The opening is absolutly perfect. Not rushed and not too slow either! Faved and liked and looking forward to more chapters! :D
Hey bro its fluttershy444, Awesome job so far. Can't wait for more.
very compelling story can't w8 for the next chapter
my favourite fan fiction reader has written a fan fiction and I have to say this is amazing good sir i can't wait for you to update this story you earned a watch
Hey bro it's TheElectricIguana, a viewer of all your videos and now a fan of your story. This is a great start and I have you favorited and have set the site to email me upon further updates. Hope to read more of the story soon and take care my friend.
Man i am really damn impressed!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the excellent work
To good i need MOAR
1052557 There will be soon. I just need to keep working on Chapter 2. It is in progress but not much has been done to it because I've been having a very, very busy month. Also, I need time to relax with my friends so I don't go insane.
Yay
incredible amazing the best thing since underwere IT IS SPECTACULER!!!!!!
1131781 But underwear isn't good... I mean, um... thank you for the compliment.
1132882 that's what i'm here for.
So… cancelled as in forever? Dose this mean that you've given up entirely, because I have not seen an update in over a year! But I liked your story, it had great potential, even though it looks similar to one out of the twelve stories I have not released yet. But if you want to continue, remember this to stop writers block, 'allow yourself to write shit'
-Lightning