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the correct spelling is Sergeant. So it should be Sergeant Maine of the Day Guard.
Princess of the Night. Since 'Night' is apart of the job title, making it a proper noun, means it should be capitalized.
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Thanks for the help, hehe
When I put this in my tracks a couple of weeks ago I thought it might have gone stagnant. But lo and behold, we have an update.
Life happens; you can never predict what will happen tomorrow with complete certainty. Keep up the good work!
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Well, thank you for being kind on giving this story a chance. Thank you for the complement!
Does Strawberry sound like Ichigo from Bleach?
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Huh? I'm sorry I'm slightly confused, are you talking about his voice?
Just a quick note: Use 'vial' instead of 'vile'. A 'vial' is a small glass container whereas 'vile' is an adjective describing something that is disgusting.
EG: "The vial broke" vs "The stench was vile"
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Thanks, it's been awhile but I'm getting back into the swing of things
I'm still here.
I'm still reading.
I'll wait. Keep up the good work!
You know, instead of using that line of asterisks, you can just add a horizontal rule. It'll auto-adjust to screen size.
Just put [ hr ] where you want it (remove spaces).
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Thanks! I'll have to try that in one of the next chapters! Lol.