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Scorch215


Greetings all and welcome to my page. I tend to write stories of a darker nature though I enjoy reading a wide range of stories. I hope you find something of interest here, have a good day.

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its so good to see up and at it again Scorch.:pinkiesad2:

Just one thing
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN FOREVER HE ACTUALLY UPLOADED

Commander Twilight's kid should meet Princess Twilight and Queen Chrysalis.

Gonna save this one for my day off... :rainbowkiss:

Nice to see you writing again Scorch! :pinkiesmile:

Welp, this world's doomed. :B

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!? I've waited so damn long for you to upload more:raritydespair:

I can’t wait for everything to go to hell!

So ?
Is Meadow Dawn from another fic ?
If yes can you share a link?
If not ... wow is the new Equestria custom made?
Thakn you :yay:

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Shes from another fic that is incomplete and on a hiatusnfor the forseeable future do to some hiccups in the background.

I think you got confused on sapience and sentience, animals like dogs and cats are sentient, we are sapient, and things like insects are neither

About halfway through the first pass of what we expect is the next chapter, just so everyone knows. We went over the first one a couple times, but the next chapter might take three depending. The ending of ch2 was only initially picked for length, but we might add or take away as we approach that point.

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Good to know! I was vaguely aware of the terms and while we each only wrote each other's characters/world initially and both have been trying to clean up, i didn't know enough about the difference to catch that. Thanks!

OK that scene of twi teaching dawn to use her hooves was kind of really uncomfortable for me cause twi basically controlled her and had now idea she was doing it it was uncomfortable and disturbing but also oddly arousing in a way

also could you tell me what that story is were dash and twilight fuse cause i swear i read a story like that years ago back in 2012 it was one of the first stories on fimfiction as a brony and fanfiction in general that i ever read i don't rember the name but i rember scenes from the story

Twilight chuckled, relaxing more from her adrenaline filled moment before as the stallion turned to walk away and disappear into the shadow of a nearby cabinet. "Yeah. I'm technically a doctor but I don't have a license so am just a medic."

i predict twi and dawn are going to bang at some point

"Y-yes m-Twilight." Dawn nodded happily,

What was that ‘m’ word?!?! Because the first thing that popped into my head was ‘mistress’, and reading the rest of the chapter, and looking at the story tags has not changed that opinion.:twilightoops:

Twilight needs to chill.

"We're going to learn some changeling things." "... We're totally going to lazy about for a few hours, aren't we?" "Yep!"

Sub Chryssie is adorable.

Maybe this dimension's Celestia and Luna are hippies?

'Dawn chuckled, He enjoys it since he' - Dawn chuckled, "He enjoys it since he

'What you reading' - What are you reading

'dawn said' - Dawn

'could also improves the' - improve

'conceptual idea from based on back home' - remove based on

'Twilight yelled falling back in her seat as the pony formed and rolled coming up as the room filled' - Twilight yelled, falling back off her seat as the pony formed and rolling back up

'She stood on her back lets' - legs

'was aimed at the sudden pony that appeared' - was aimed at the suddenly appeared pony

'dealing with for a several years' - remove a

'there was enchantments in it' - there were enchantments in it

'get sole good practice' - some

Sawn is tough she doesn't flinch with violet.

And plot thinkers and being on Discord with Scotch not surprised by Twilight's actions at al

damn it i love anything in this universe but this story is making me really damn uncomfortable i mean just hypnotizing people without evin knowing your doing it and looking into someones head without permission both of those things i hate

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at least tell me this gets found out at some point that twi is hypnotizing dawn

Dawn lowered the book and reached for the next heaviest one, grunting quietly as she tried to lift it with the one hoof, feeling it rise slowly, but she keeps her grip and raises it to her cin(what?) before setting it down gently

indeed... what is that supposed to be?

"Good good. Now the next one. Relax. Breathe slowly and don't think. Jet be calm and listen to my voice and focus."

Think you mean "Just"?


Huh... did Chryssi link Dawn and her baby by accident? Or was it on purpose?...

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crap missed a edit note. :facehoof:

thanks for pointing that out.

"Ponies who've bonded to dragons and are fighting a rebellion against those who would enslave them."

Eragon, eh? I loved those books, even the movie wasn't bad in my opinion.

Interesting. I still dunno if Twilight is doing that on purpose.

Chryssie, on the other hand, is gathering intel, it'd seem.

Violet is cute. And creepy. Adoracreepy.

'Chrysalis viable tensed' - visibly

'Luna is allow in my head' - allowed

'don't lose the bookmark place' - bookmark in place

'greatest of terms for changelings' - terms with changelings

'So what you reading' - what are you

'humming a cheerfully tune' - cheerful

>>Flops on the desk, drained from pumping out so much material in a short time, not counting building a D&D campaign including scorch and several others for them to enjoy.

Hope you all enjoy... phew. I'mma going to rest now.

Ladies and gentleman, the deviant side of our adorable little solider.

Kinky.

D'awwww @ Violet.

Cupcake vacuum.

'Chrysalis mentally recoiled that the strength' - recoiled at the

'stories does twilight tell violet' - stories does Twilight tell Violet

'How you feeling' - How are you feeling

'any problem is doing what I tell you' - problem in doing

'was that so hard dawn' - Dawn

'little pony pet. but she's' - But

wow, do these versions of the sisters suck. Hell how was this world's Twilight taught? I feel that are little soldier Twilight is eitehr goign to rip them a new one or she is going to make a little trip to this world's Everfree for a bit.

Don't let Violet near the Sugarcube corner!

Smooth, Sunbutt.

Them feels.

'purchases for strawberry shortcakes' - of

'stalwart' - Stalwart

'very well the worry if a new mother' - of

'she finished her first bite of her food' - she finished the first bite of her food.

'detailed cover story they would hold up' - that

It doesn't matter what universe you're from, you don't disrespect fallen soldiers like that. Ever.

Seriously Celestia, it's not a hard concept to get your head around.

I read the original story (I think) this one did the crossover from and I most say, those versions of Luna and Celestia are dumb. Every time they would get story time I would boil because they tried to maintain status quo with ignorance and failure to take action.

calling it now cellys been replaced

*reads AN*

Speaking of "Recruits" .... :facehoof:
Check the chapter name, Scorch:moustache:

Hmm, I'm more and more curious if they'll meet this world's Chryssie and if our Chryssie manages to convince her to try diplomacy.

Maybe that Svi-thingy escaped and possessed them?

I foresee a great strawberry shortage in Equestria.

'patted their head gently' - her

'and internally hoping she doesn't continue' - and hoping internally that she wouldn't continue

'just in a differ setting' - different

"Yes, I'd imagine Twilight has returned from her walk as well." She said. "And it was very fun master."

So Twilight "went for a walk"?

Comment posted by Meadow_Dawn deleted Jul 23rd, 2018

A dozen changelings here... that is bad. I can’t remember how large you said the hive was, but if we assume 100,000 changelings, then that means 0.012% of changelings turned up here. And if we assume equestria has a population of 300 million and 0.012% of them ended up here, then that’s 36,000 ponies.

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let's try that again, since allegedly people don't get noticed unless it's on the same chapter...

Considering I absolutely love doing Alucard's voice from that series (and am extremely close despite being a girl n all... ty testosterone for one benefit!) i laughed, grateful someone got the reference~

That was close. Hopefully no one will die in any encounter like that.

'Eject, eject!'

Kinky.

Yay, more lings!

'carried simile items' - similar

'object then the other two' - than

'to prop himself up and blood dripping from that leg' - up, blood

'and a second leg was dripping blood onto the floor, leaving the pony grimacing on the floor with it' - and his other leg was dripping blood now, leaving the pony grimacing on the floor

'Stalwart stood after this, hearing a ringing in his head from the sounds prior' - Stalwart stood up after this, hearing ringing in his head from the sounds prior

'something else, and stood' - stood up

'metal ate a high speed' - at

'helped by the fact that there were a couple guardsponies up ahead they were already in sight' - remove they were

'you can removed the evidence' - can remove the

'This was not going to plan' - is

'see in the streets form may save your life' - streets' or street's

Hmm... is this canon to the main fic or no?

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Yes, its why its listed as a sequel and the other one is on hiatus.

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Yes, as stated in the notes the interludes are the scense from the chapters containing sex, i know several people that dont want to see the scense so we devised a way to have both and that theu could skip them.

Thugs try to rob a place that Twilight is enjoying. *grabs popcorn*

Did I just miss it, or did Twi never chew out Stalwart? Or does she corner him about it later? 'Cause with how much it seemed to have bothered her and how she is, she wouldn't just let it go.

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