The unicorn sat with his little filly by the fireplace and opened the book once more. "Let's see what happens next!"
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Nice and tight little action story. Enjoyed it :)
Bees. *shudder*
Short, concise and easy going. A very nice prequel. Glad to finally have read. About the only thing I thought could be better was how the Cheerilee scene was done. She seemed a bit out of it, I assume she was just reeling from the shock of it all.
I have no complaints about this prequel. It did what it needed to do and conveyed the message it was trying to get across splendidly.
Well done.
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Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
But... Scootaloo can't fly.
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She can here.
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The power of story telling, sir.