• Member Since 13th Mar, 2017
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StatiZkyZ


AKA Le Durgen, a novice horse writer

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Twilight and Starlight have a truly special friendship bond. Grown with a very different background, they are like the opposite sides of a same coin. Twilight can help Starlight who grows without friendship, and Starlight can help Twilight with some hindsight she may not think about.

This is the short stories of these two mares talking about themselves, what they lack, what problems they have, or about recent events.


Just a little miniseries I would like to write from time to time. I definitely love the interaction between these two mares :twilightsmile:

And I wish there's a Starlight emote.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

The grammar could use a bit of work, but all in all, this was good.

8999126
That's why I'm still a writer in training :twilightsheepish:
Thanks for reading!

8999809
I look forward to reading more!

Twilight should’ve went to apologize to the CMC immediately! She might forget while playing chess with Starlight.

All in all, this was pretty good. It gives motivations, has Starlight do what she does best (be a supporter), and has a good conclusion. Gold star.

9045296
Counselor Starlight is best Starlight :twilightsmile:
Thanks for the feedback!

9045993
No problem. Can't wait to see more.

Comment posted by Vigriff deleted Jul 30th, 2018
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